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Men come down for fun, Duck hover, on edge of dune. Crowd move down, open gun, Whop… knock off duck, under moon. Cook over ember, devour upon noon. By: Greg Stanley December 13, 2011 Heads or Tails Contest Sponsored by nikko palmario

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Date: 2/1/2012 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations Greg.Very good poem with those restrictions.
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:41:00 PM
I do love this one Greg! I'm glad you made it in the winner's circle!
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Greg. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:16:00 AM
This was a cool poem,Greg! It almost made me feel like I was there (although I would have my qualms with shooting the duck, poor duck, nothing personal to you nor this poem, just me ^_^...), but I would have enjoyed cooking and devouring the duck :)-- Super duper congrats on your win here!
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:43:00 AM
Good one well done congratulations Greg x
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Date: 1/1/2012 12:33:00 PM
Very nice take on the contest.A winner here.
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Date: 12/14/2011 8:35:00 PM
Greg-What a fun poem! Great job w/ such limited resources! I'm still working on mine...It's been a lot of fun. Much luck to you in the contest...I won't be competing against you b/c I chose heads :)
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