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Devotion Poem Paradise

Devotion Poem, Paradise. (For Jim) Dare I say — We feel marvelously sculpted to fit, Our hugs mold their moments Into wishing to last forever. Dare I say — my silent hopes Rise into the liquid Moonlit blue above our kisses, Wanting to make millions of dozens. Dare I tell the truth of how My heart speaks out to you Whenever we separate? That somehow Physics moves you into two: to the elsewhere You travel,yet still always here by me. Dare I utter the new quantum rules of love? How starlit galaxies hide in your eyes To all except for me. How our waltz moves on Through the juggled dimensions we cling to. May I sing for others what our hearts Keep in whispers? How to sense paradise In the gift of your devoted spirit Always awaiting close, holding the secret Blessings of divine starlight in your pockets. Dare I share the jewels of this love, That they may be found and more easily kept? Or, Might the vast variations of paradise await Their own finding and defining, like rainbows With their hidden treasures. —————————————————————————————————————————— (c) sally young eslinger 8/22-25/22

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Date: 9/18/2022 7:39:00 AM
Masterpiece! You get a Fav.! One of the best ever on Soup!
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Date: 9/9/2022 10:57:00 AM
Love the touch of science in your write, but mostly the touching subject. Well done Sally.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/17/2022 7:11:00 PM
James, nice to have you come by to read and relate,, , my Jim is a scientist, so the mysteries of quantum theory are sometimes tossed about here and May roll across the room to link onto s poem. Life happens… many thanks,
Date: 9/4/2022 2:00:00 PM
my praise would not be worthy of this....it is simply, endearing and breathtaking...such a beautiful capture of love in its most tender of ways....your devoted fan....
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/17/2022 7:20:00 PM
Timothy! Dear brother poet! I just reread this for 1st time since posting. Made the tears stream down my cheeks. Our love so blessed, almost unbelievably deep after all these 41 years! God’s design, I guess, and in the hard times, faith and prayer do work. So touched by your words. xox

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