Devotion Poem Entangled

for Jim)DEVOTION POEM - ENTANGLED.    (for Jim)

For me he’s The One.
As I’ve been for him 
   his Only One.
From the beginning when
Our fates embraced.

I listen to his breathing, while concerned,
He watches how well I’m moving.
Around him, I am a  verdant vine.
He rises near — as a braid of wildflowers
   around me to twine.
   

Our holy Lord sees our love for each other as
The poetry of twin pendulums  —  joined signs in
The physics and mathematics of His space and time
As we move together — entangled.

Forever our love is synchronized.
The scales of our music harmonize.
We see starlights shine — during  the any
Moments of time when we embrace the highest
   of love within each other.


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(c) sally young eslinger 
With thanks to reading here on PS
got me to ask Jim about entanglement theory, resulting
 in the inspiration for this.  Thankful we inspire one another.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Deo Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Amen & praises to Jesus, Jim and Sally. Truly inspired ... U are a quick study, able to digest science, as in "space, time, entanglement" ThanX for yr encouraging visits
Eslinger Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Oh, Anii, you got it! Saw a mention of entanglement theory & when I asked Jim to explain it, I exclaimed afterward, “That’s us!” He thought, then had to agree, then the poem was born. To compliment this go to YouTube to hear “Dancing” by Eleation Music. Big hugs!
Seeker Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 2:45 AM
Twinflames! Enjoyed this deep, soulful write, Sally, God bless your blissful love for each other
Eslinger Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 8:49 PM
Many thanks. One month til we’re together 40 yrs. Didn’t think I’d live that long much less be married. My cup runnetheth over. You are dear to send blessings. I believe…
Ray Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 8:51 PM
well done and an endearing read line by line....it is alway a pleasure to have blessings shared....thank you
Eslinger Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 8:43 PM
Timothy, and thanks to you for stopping by to read and comment. I am enjoying your work. Keep inspired blessings to you!
Faulkner Avatar
June 29, 2022 at 2:02 PM
It sounds like you two share a very special love, it is wonderful how you bring out the best in each other!
Eslinger Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 8:56 PM
When we first met, Jim said it was destiny. Since I can’t walk or do stairs, I’m stuck in hosp bed in LR nearly 2 yrs now. At the first, he moved down to sofa about 7’ across from me & he retired last Dec. so we live our days that close
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