Devotion

My heart starts beating faster When you step into the room I mimic your movements here We are now just one.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:39:00 PM

VERY NICE WIN, Congratulations,Kristen on your sweet poem. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 4:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/17/2011 10:41:00 AM

lovely, congrats on your win in the contest

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/17/2011 10:34:00 AM

Hello Kristen, Congratulations on the win in the contest. This is so well done. I love it! As Always, Shar

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/17/2011 8:43:00 AM

Kristen, Congrats, this is beautiful:)))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Kristen sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/17/2011 4:35:00 AM

Hello Kristen. Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write. Eamon

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 8:23:00 PM

Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2011 6:47:00 PM

Well!! Congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest, Kristen! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/16/2011 5:34:00 PM

Congrats Kristen on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu .. enjoy your top spot with luv.. and another top tenner too...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2011 5:34:00 PM

my oh my... fantastic write,kristen! CONGRATS! :) nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2011 3:05:00 PM

A very romantic poem, Kristen. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/16/2011 2:58:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, kristen

John Freeman

Date: 1/16/2011 2:39:00 PM

Very romantice, Kristen an awesome poem, congratulations on ent place.. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 1/15/2011 1:26:00 PM

Kristen, thanks for your support of my contest, it does not go unnoticed. Agape, Moss

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 2:05:00 PM

Well done kristen, enjoyed the racing passion..p.d.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/14/2011 1:26:00 PM

Everything fits nicely in this fine example of a dodoitsu.