Devotion

My heart starts beating faster
When you step into the room
I mimic your movements here
We are now just one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 7:39 PM
VERY NICE WIN, Congratulations,Kristen on your sweet poem. LUv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Roberts Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 10:41 AM
lovely, congrats on your win in the contest
Ruebel Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Hello Kristen, Congratulations on the win in the contest. This is so well done. I love it! As Always, Shar
Laan Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Kristen, Congrats, this is beautiful:)))
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Kristen sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
Duffin Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:35 AM
Hello Kristen. Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write. Eamon
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 6:47 PM
Well!! Congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest, Kristen! Always, Annalise
Onclaud Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 5:34 PM
my oh my... fantastic write,kristen! CONGRATS! :) nette
Sweetheart Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 5:34 PM
Congrats Kristen on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu .. enjoy your top spot with luv.. and another top tenner too...
Devonshire Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:05 PM
A very romantic poem, Kristen. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, kristen
Freeman Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Very romantice, Kristen an awesome poem, congratulations on ent place.. Agape, Moses
Freeman Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Kristen, thanks for your support of my contest, it does not go unnoticed. Agape, Moss
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January 14, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Well done kristen, enjoyed the racing passion..p.d.
Pettit Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Everything fits nicely in this fine example of a dodoitsu.
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