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Cowering in the shadow of fear, you count every blessing tear by tear. And surrender to life's ugly side, unwittingly letting evil slide. Bullets rip through this fabric of lies, and somewhere, somehow, somebody dies. For drugs and guns, paint the hood in blood, stains of youth, lying dead in the mud. Streets left to the horrors of the night curtains are drawn completely tight. And doors are locked with deadbolts in place, while pride vanishes without a trace. As crack whores and pimps stakeout the dark, needles and condoms litter the park. And children live under house arrest, afraid of monsters out to molest. Taking a life's a juvenile thrill, unafraid of the law, youngsters kill. And death runs rampant in sin-city, where life's cheap and devoid of pity. (Rhyme) 10/26/2017

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Date: 5/26/2018 8:55:00 PM
Powerful. Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/27/2017 9:42:00 AM
A sad reminder of how many people live and how it affects all of us in one way or another, rhymes are excellent as is word selection. Well done as always Emile.
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Date: 10/27/2017 9:53:00 AM
Thanks John, I welcome your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/26/2017 4:22:00 PM
A sad and sorry commentary on our world today Emile. A great poem. Effortless rhymes!
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Date: 10/26/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Dean, I agree with you it is a sad world we live in my friend, Emile.

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