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Devoid Of Fear


I feel safe and whole here
Devoid of fear

Alone listening to the rain
Devoid of worry or pain

Cocooned by green paddocks and trees
Devoid of thoughts of death or disease

No humans for miles around
Devoid of white noise sound

Completely at one with mother nature
Devoid of chaos, destruction, haters

I feel happy here as my soul is at rest
Devoid of negativity and lifes stress

I feel safe and whole here
Devoid of fear!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/6/2025 5:44:00 PM

That sch a place can exist in today's world is... is... well... at least it can exist in our minds...

Deb M
Date: 7/8/2025 6:40:00 AM

It does exist we just need to find it! Thanks BB….Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 7/6/2025 11:23:00 AM

Beautiful poetry, Deb. To be devoid of fear is a blessing. Your imagery described it well. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Deb M
Date: 7/8/2025 6:40:00 AM

Thankyou so much Bill….your Aussie buddy! Debx

Silent One

Date: 7/6/2025 8:21:00 AM

Sounds lovely.. the silence of nature is so peaceful and you described it so well..

Deb M
Date: 7/8/2025 6:39:00 AM

Nice to see you S.O and thankyou! Debx

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/6/2025 7:31:00 AM

Dear Deb, your poem is breathtaking it its sense of emotional, physical and spiritual serenity. The imagery and emotion is vibrant yet tender with a knowing satisfaction. A sanctuary beautifully imagined or real.. I wish I could be there too. Fantastic and deeply moving poetry, my dear poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Deb M
Date: 7/8/2025 6:38:00 AM

Susan…you always give the nicest kind comments…Thankyou so much my thoughtful friend! Debx

Anne Winter

Date: 7/6/2025 1:19:00 AM

Dear Deb, this poem feels like a sanctuary! A happy and safe place in itself! I loved reading this poem. Beautifully written. I could just imagine the quiet, calm and tranquility! Ah! How peaceful<3

Deb M
Date: 7/8/2025 6:34:00 AM

Awww thankyou Anne for such a gracious comment! Very appreciated my friend…Debx

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 7/5/2025 4:48:00 PM

Hello Deb, this is a wonderful piece, beautifully written. Few are so lucky to find such a wonderful place. You’re truly blessed. Have a wonderful day, my friend.

Deb M
Date: 7/8/2025 6:32:00 AM

You are very sweet Zyrool….thankyou…Debx

Emilia James

Date: 7/3/2025 12:45:00 PM

We do need that place to find inner peace. The world and life itself is so chaotic and stressful now. Would give you that that place if I could. (if you needed it) Emilia : )

Deb M
Date: 7/8/2025 6:31:00 AM

How lovely to see/read your comment Emilia! Thankyou for your kind words….l hope you are well my lovely friend! Deb

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/2/2025 7:34:00 PM

Beautiful!

Deb M
Date: 7/3/2025 4:06:00 AM

Thankyou so much Arthur! Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/2/2025 12:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Devoid Of Fear" write. Love this line, "I feel happy here as my soul is at rest Devoid of negativity and lifes stress." I would love to be here. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........

Deb M
Date: 7/3/2025 4:09:00 AM

Hi Paula....l am so glad you like this....we all need a safe place away from life's woes! Thankyou sweet Paula....Debx