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Devoid of Brightness

Though gloomy, devoid of brightness’ stain Beyond the firmament*… God sees me languishing in pain… ...with my heart pleading for His miracle to gain. I praise Him… since from the sky, He spreads to me His loving domain.
* Psalm 19:1 The heavens declare the glory of God; and the firmament sheweth his handywork. Four lines are from the poem, “BEYOND THE SKY” posted on May 26, 2018. September 7, 2020 6th place, "Rithimus Divisa 5" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory R. Barden; judged on 9/20/2020.

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Date: 9/20/2020 5:45:00 PM
He indeed sees, beyond the firmament! Congratulations, Beata!
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Date: 9/20/2020 4:12:00 PM
Lovely 4 lines , Beats. Many congrat's on your win. Elaine
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Date: 9/20/2020 2:18:00 PM
So beautifully written, Beata. Congrats for your win
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Date: 9/20/2020 9:17:00 AM
You have expressed one of the most stunning of God's miracles - through earthly gloom God never leaves our side. Congratulations on your winning placement, Beata. Sending you bunches of blessings!
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Date: 9/20/2020 4:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Beata. Well done ~
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