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Devil's Island

I'll tell you a tale
of our own Devil's Island
and the demonic crash
of the waves in the swell.
The smell and the taste
of the ball breaking weather;
the ghosts that deliver 
poor sailors to Hell.

We were out in the water
in the Magdalens
the wind plucked the ropes
of our rigging at sea.
We looked for a port 
and saw many lights flashing
"That's old Devil's Island,"
said the skipper to me.

Tongues began hurling
their fierce imprecations
"to come to the island
safe landfall to thee."
But the skipper turned round
the ship with a vengeance,
"That old Devil's Island
will never get me."

I thought he was mad
to be scared of a legend
it was my first time
in a storm on the sea
and two men washed over
to Davey Jones locker
"God bless 'em, they'll rest now,"
the skip said to me.

Protesting the treatment
of two forlorn sailors
I said to the skipper,
"It's not very well."
"It's better," he said,
"that they're resting in Heaven
than entering into
the portals of Hell."

The wind lasted the night
then the voices did falter
the lights blinkered out
and I saw very well
so many rocks, jagged
just waiting to smash us
the Devil's Isle gateways
await in the swell.

If you're on a ship
and the voices of demons
come tell you it's safe
in their harbor a lee
remember the shoreline
at old Devil's Island
then turn the ship seaward
and gracelessly flee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/5/2016 7:10:00 AM
Oh Madeleine-loved this one...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:08:00 PM
Madeleine, thanks for dropping this one in the contest. A rollicking voyage on a turbulent sea complete with mystery and suspicions. This is the first time a found this one to read....glad you played in the contest.
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Date: 10/5/2016 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words and support. And thanks for the third prize.
Date: 12/19/2013 1:40:00 PM
Madeleine, . Congratulations, and thank you for supporting the Ballad contest.... Forever- Linda
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Date: 12/26/2009 7:37:00 AM
Awesome! Your words placed me on the ship! Congrats and Good Luck! Hugs, Robin
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Date: 12/23/2009 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Madeleine and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:27:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:48:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Madeleine! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:40:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/16/2009 11:42:00 AM
congrats on being featured and a wonderful poem/tale
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:42:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/14/2009 3:39:00 PM
congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 12/14/2009 11:36:00 AM
Madeleine - what a wonderful piece - has gone straight into my favs. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Madeleine. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/15/2009 9:41:00 PM
a wonderfully written tale within this piece that speaks outwardly about life in general as well to be watchful and leary Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 7/23/2009 10:59:00 AM
Another wonderful write Madeleine, for a few poems, so much enjoyment>>James
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Date: 3/15/2009 4:24:00 PM
hi,this poem described so well helped me remember when we were at sea on our small boat and the sea was so rough,i thought we were gonna die,i had a bad experience that day,and what you've written here describes it well,at least i wasn't at the devil's island:-).cheers and thanks for finding time to read my poem-charmaine malta
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Date: 1/1/2009 8:47:00 AM
Your vision is full with adventure drawn into, while danger lurks nearby. It's mostly truth of our imagination, but not so sure. One can sense the cold and fury. Thanks, Jan
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Date: 12/18/2008 5:40:00 PM
Dear Madeleine, WOW superb Story and as a Rhymist love the Rhyme YOU are quite ingenious in YOUR POETRY LOVEYOUr POETIC flair...HG
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:03:00 PM
Deep write...once again thanks for the comments... *Breana
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:00:00 PM
Excellent cadence and rhyming... a stirring tale of life at sea wonderfully expressed! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 9/21/2008 7:53:00 AM
Being 30 years Navy, and a life ong love affair with the ocean, I loved this one. I was in the Atlantic aboard a cargo ship for Hurricane Dorothy in '66. It gave one a sense of awe. We also sat in one of the holds in '65 on our way to the Caribbean telling stories about the Devil's Triangle. A lot of great memories. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/2/2008 8:10:00 AM
Hi Madeleine I was caught up with one, word for word, line for line! I felt like I was right there on the ship, taking in all the surroundings. I could feel the fear in the air. And I loved it! Excellent write! Read it twice! Thanks for your comments on my latest. I so appreciate it. Your feedback meant a lot to me. Have a wonderful day hun. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/18/2008 1:02:00 PM
Wow - that was a great poem - I don't know anything about being at sea but this poem is amazing - God Bless
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