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Devil's Fire

Deep within the pits of this fiery hell Upon my throne I sit Making mockery of those below The pathetic fools trapped to a life of servitude Confined to this blasted pit I can still torment those on earth Fire! Fire! Rise O’ up! Fire! Fire! Do my biddings Fire! Fire! Light the way to the tunnel of death Bring me my mortal souls And the sorry bastards that follow thee Fire! Oh thou Fire listen to me I command ye to light yourself Burn bright to your hearts desire Fire! Fire!

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/13/2013 11:18:00 AM

Dear Rebecca,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. A Hearty, warm Welcome to POETRYSOUP, with this breathtaking POEM; written I presume with the Pen of Darkness.I believe I will see more of YOUR Talented Quill, written with the Quill of LIGHT.I have looked through YOUR repitoire of Titles and see many Parts POEMS. As a matter of fact I usually comment from the first POEM on the Soup to Present day.I am going to read YOUR "Heartbreak -versions 1&2.LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 10/24/2012 11:17:00 AM

"you can play with fire.... but one day the table might turn, and the fire will play with you"--- haha, excellent write Becca...I like fire!!

J.W. Earnings

Date: 2/5/2012 12:33:00 PM

This is firing up my heart! :) I LOVE IT! This poem is like a chant!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/21/2011 5:20:00 PM

My fav (: I can eel the FURY of the inferior! Always, Laura