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Devil's Concoction

This has brought my express train to a halt. A smoky distillation of barley malt, has me unable to think straight. Here I am in the joint very late. One shot was not enough to sate me; soon there came number two, then three. What first tasted smooth was getting a little rough. The bartender then told me I had enough. He just called a taxi to take me home. Tomorrow, there’s no way I’m going to roam. This booze in the brown bottle put me on the shelf. I swear this stuff was made by the devil himself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/27/2012 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations Robert on your win.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Your man is going to have a nasty hangover! LOL. I enjoyed reading. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:11:00 AM
congrats Robert on an excitimg win for awesome words luv..
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Date: 2/25/2012 8:52:00 AM
Hi Robert; This is pretty good. Yes - that stuff will get you. Lucilla
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Date: 2/25/2012 6:20:00 AM
know that feeling Robert, interesting this is. harry
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Date: 2/24/2012 10:27:00 PM
Robert, wow... that..man has done much..gosh he scares me... great poem..always..pd
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