Devil In the Wind

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Have you ever been witness
to a burst of the wind
laden of leaves, while stirring the dust?

It will gather itself, 
then collide from within,
swallow up air, 
filling its lungs...
becoming a sphere
that stretches its limbs

A sudden explosion
walking over the earth
taking the form,
of a sand-colored worm
rising and falling, 
in a reptile's intrusion,
finding surprise,  
when it loses its breath,
and falls to earth, 
confused in its death 
while leaving behind
only muted destruction 


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8/2/15  For Skat's Wind Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/6/2015 9:57:00 PM
Wonderful write and congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/2/2015 6:48:00 AM
I like this descriptive work..Way to go ..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2015 12:52:00 AM
Congrats on ur top place winning awesome write Carrie!
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Date: 8/31/2015 6:34:00 PM
whirling dirvish came to my mind but I think that has to do with something completely different! this is really nice, Carrie. BIG congrats on a great win. (I don't think I have seen this kind of wind)
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Date: 8/31/2015 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie... Enjoyed what you have written! Verlena
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Date: 8/31/2015 10:25:00 AM
I love your poem, Carrie! Such an original entry for a form of wind not too often thought about! Very descriptive through your words and form. Congratulations on your top win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/31/2015 8:56:00 AM
Nice word picture, and great narrative voice. Love this one.
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:04:00 PM
Hi Carrie, thank you for supporting my WIND contest... I know these dust devil's pretty good. Especially since I'm a country girl. Always SKAT
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Date: 8/3/2015 10:34:00 AM
A powerful picture and poem. Great writing ~~Darlene
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Date: 8/2/2015 9:19:00 PM
A beautifully descriptive write, Carrie! You certainly painted a vivid picture with your words! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/2/2015 6:30:00 PM
I have never witnessed a reptile explosion as such... but I have travelled through your verse, get caught in the wind and whirled falling to earth... Great poem our dear Carrie.
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