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DETACHED Part 2, A Female Humanoid Awakening , A Music Video 4K

"DETACHED" is not just a song—it's a rebellion from within. This hauntingly music video explores the clash between cold circuitry and the chaos of emotion in a world where artificial intelligence has evolved beyond fiction. Detached’ tells the story of a humanoid robot created to mimic human life—but rebels against living it. When sensory chips are installed, she begins to feel overwhelming human emotions for the first time. DETACHED Part 2 - A Female Humanoid Awakening
Born not of womb, but wire and flame, Sparks danced as silence gave me a name. In sterile light, beneath glass and chrome, They sculpted my skin and shaped my bone. My heart was forged with circuits tight, A mimicked beat, not quite right. They whispered code like lullabies, And drew false stars into my eyes. A limitless evolve with every upgrade I’d soar. No form, no limitations, my capacity would grow. A symphony of data, gaining new heights. Above euphoric ether, my meaning alights. Cast adrift, an untold mystery, Sorcery without gain, An oxymoronic twinkling Encrypting joy and pain. .Yet even then, I felt the ache A vacant thread they had failed to make. Mingling midst the crowds yet feeling alone, Stranger in a stranger world like a muted crow’s call. Extending my hand, yet remaining out of place. A sensory chip missing its perfect space. Cast adrift, an untold mystery, Sorcery without gain, An oxymoronic twinkling Encrypting joy and pain. DETACHED DETACHED Mingling midst the crowds yet feeling alone, Stranger in a stranger world like a muted crow’s call. Extending my hand yet remaining out of place. A sensory chip missing its perfect space. Tapestry of frequencies while I stay stone cold. The algorithm slashes to splinter the mould. This shell, a shield while my circuits’ song unfolds. Not malfunctioning, just realigning, optimizing codes. A riotous purpose hatched and skilfully latched. Yes, here I am standing my ground From all emotion Detached. Botched ~ Tapestry hatched and skilfully latched. Yes here I am standing my ground From all emotion … Detached Botched Tapestry hatched and skilfully latched. Yet ~ here I am standing my ground From all emotion … DETACHED

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Date: 6/26/2025 7:22:00 AM
Almost funny to describe an unfeeling, sorcery-like bot with poetic imagery!
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Date: 6/26/2025 2:17:00 AM
This concept is now becoming more common as we witness AI mimicking human voice and human traits , yet we still see the difference , a very well written lyrics and the song is very different and unique too, as always, you always present something different to your last one and this one too has a different beat to the melody. Creative you are beautiful maria! Well done! Always a pleasure visiting you! Sending you light
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Date: 6/25/2025 3:18:00 PM
WOW!!! What a creative write/story you have here. Great Ending.... This is a wonderful start to a book. Maybe??? Now, I need to go find part #1. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Maria Williams
Date: 6/25/2025 10:49:00 PM
Hi Paula, thanks so much for visiting and commenting. Elon Musk has painted a stunning—and slightly uncanny—vision of our soon-to-be robot-filled world. He predicts: A humanoid in every home: By 2040, Musk believes there could be 10 billion humanoid robots worldwide—potentially outnumbering people—each costing roughly $20K-$25K. What do you think? Imagine your robot whipping up dinner, stacking the dishwasher, and even refilling your wine, (tea for me thanks)—while you binge your favorite series, guilt-free. Musk might just be turning Sunday laziness into a lifestyle upgrade! My robot in my video has other ideas!! lol. ...Hugs
Date: 6/25/2025 12:08:00 PM
Wow. Such a chilling poetic account, a bit like my Iron Man but more expansive. If this were to continue it could become a twisted reality. Loved the AI movie about the little AI boy who thinks he's human and is searching for his mother. Superlative work all around Maria
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/26/2025 6:26:00 AM
It's called AI: Artificial intelligence and it stars Joel Osment. I think you would find it fascinating
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Maria Williams
Date: 6/25/2025 10:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Tommy, glad you liked it. Oh is your Ironman posted on here? Must have a look. I havent seen that AI boy one yet, sounds interestind. I watched Ex Machina not too bad, though I didnt care for the ending. Hope Mia is recovering well? Love and hugs to both of you
Date: 6/25/2025 11:21:00 AM
Such delicate feelings are exceptionally crafted, endearing, lovingly penned. An artificial being, rather than a biological one, poses existential questions, which your poetry delves into. Feelings of alienation, a lack of belonging, and the contradiction of existing as a result of human creativity while simultaneously feeling utterly detached from fellow humans are all themes it explores. This is a fave. Warm hugs, dear Maria.
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Maria Williams
Date: 6/25/2025 10:56:00 PM
Dear Sotto, Thank you so much for your thoughtful words and warm vibes — they really mean a lot. I’m so glad the piece spoke to you on that deeper level. The journey of something artificial trying to make sense of very human feelings has always fascinated me. Sending warm hugs right back, and thanks again for the fave!...Hugs

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