Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Destiny-Forty Contest

Forty Contest
Sponsor: Silent One

destiny is not by chance
instead it is a choice
you can choose to advance
by using your strong voice
keep believing goodness in yourself
take risks when you lead
If they ask for twelve
go and give them thirteen

Eight lines
Five words in each line
40 Words

~ 2nd Place Winner~

Date Written: January 21, 2016

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 28, 2016 at 12:17 AM Wonderful write Laura...Congrats on big win!! Beautiful Scars January 28, 2016 at 9:12 AM Thank you Dr. Upma: *smiles*

Richard Lamoureux January 26, 2016 at 9:26 AM Nicely done Laura. Beautiful Scars January 26, 2016 at 9:35 AM Many thanks Richard..be blessed *smiles* -luloo

Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:28 AM Congratulations Laura on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans Beautiful Scars January 26, 2016 at 9:34 AM Thank you Hans, be blessed *smiles* -luloo

Joyce Johnson January 25, 2016 at 8:41 PM congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Beautiful Scars January 26, 2016 at 9:34 AM Thank you Joyce and be blessed *smiles* -luloo

Lin Lane January 25, 2016 at 8:35 PM Congratulations, Luloo, on a very keen writing! Beautiful Scars January 26, 2016 at 9:33 AM thank you lady Lin :) Be blessed *smiles*

Sandra Haight January 25, 2016 at 5:45 PM Exceptional words of wisdom, Laura Loo. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win. Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars January 25, 2016 at 5:55 PM Thank you Sandra, always too sweet to me, you're a blessing :) -luloo

Jan Allison January 25, 2016 at 5:29 PM Dropping back with my congrats Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars January 25, 2016 at 5:54 PM Thank you lady *smiles* -luloo

Ralph Sergi January 23, 2016 at 5:26 PM Hi Laura: I really enjoyed the poem; best of luck in the contest. Thank you for your comment on my Poetry Soup Beautiful Scars January 23, 2016 at 5:33 PM Thank you Ralph, very sweet :) *smiles* -luloo

Nette Onclaud January 21, 2016 at 10:43 PM i like this.. very positive and encouraging, laura..huggs! Beautiful Scars January 22, 2016 at 11:13 AM Thank you sweet Nette! (I've always loved your name) :)-luloo

White Sage January 21, 2016 at 4:46 PM excellent write Laura, best of luck in the contest Beautiful Scars January 21, 2016 at 5:28 PM thank you WS :) Be blessed *smiles*

Jan Allison January 21, 2016 at 4:46 PM Love the positivity LuLoo:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Beautiful Scars January 21, 2016 at 5:27 PM Thank you lovely lady :) *smiles* -luloo