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Destiny To Try

in ocean of air as the fishes in water destiny to try mortal everyone destination never ends next step to the next

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Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/23/2014 10:40:00 PM

A try can save a life BL. Excellent write... Verlena

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/24/2014 9:32:00 AM

Thanks for your nice comment, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/23/2014 4:26:00 PM

Hi Bi; This very nice. Our destiny may end here, but it goes on to another life. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/24/2014 9:31:00 AM

Thanks a lot your visit to my page and for wonderful comment. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2014 2:43:00 PM

- The one who dares nothing ..... nothing will win - Well written my friend, bl. - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/23/2014 9:00:00 AM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl