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Destiny Calls Me Home

My heart cries out to you from this dark valley. Answering the longest most lonesome echo. Your voice lingers in each tree branch and I feel a live hum seeping through my soul. Creation of love by the melodious swaying of these trees. Windswept mountains tower over this lonely valley, making dark shadows by the moon's pearly light. Creeping wild honeysuckle smells remind me of you. Your tender embraces and passionate reality make your dark handsome face even more surreal. Flying through the wind your dark tresses caress my face as we speed toward that wonderful rendezvous with destiny!

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/21/2014 7:15:00 AM

:D this one is great:) sweet write of love and beautiful imagery too. :) welcome to Poetrysoup.. :) i hope you ar enjoying here as I am. :)God bless. :) olive here

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 4:08:00 PM

Noelle, thank you for the comment on my comment... PD

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2014 7:29:00 AM

A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Noelle

Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/9/2014 12:02:00 PM

Thank you for your nice comments and congrats...Noelle

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 7:25:00 AM

Hello Noelle, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/9/2014 12:01:00 PM

Thank you for your nice comments and you have a nice week too Noelle

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/29/2014 10:37:00 AM

You will fit in nicely!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/29/2014 10:07:00 AM

This is a romantic piece with just the right amount of angst to create romantic tension. Lovely first offering. Welcome to the soup.

Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/29/2014 10:22:00 AM

Richard, Thank you for the warm welcome and the nice comments...I can already tell that this is a warm and very talented group of people...Noelle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2014 3:37:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Noelle :) - I choose your first lovely written free verse :) - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/27/2014 11:34:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind welcome and the information...I can already tell that this is a wonderful place of talented and warm people...Noelle

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/26/2014 9:53:00 PM

Your first poem is terrific.. "Creation of love by the melodious swaying of these trees. Windswept mountains tower over this lonely valley, making dark shadows by the moon's pearly light. Creeping wild honeysuckle smells remind me of you." This stanza especially struck me. Bravo!!!

Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/26/2014 10:22:00 PM

Thank you so much for your nice comments...Noelle

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2014 8:25:00 PM

Wonderful first poem, Noelle,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/26/2014 9:00:00 PM

Hi SKAT, Thanks so much for the warm welcome. I wrote an Acrostic poem telling a little about myself but a few other things..I'm 24 work in information systems and do piano concerts...work with seniors..thanks for being interested...Noelle

Andy Richards

Date: 5/26/2014 12:55:00 PM

I love the romance in your poem!

Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/26/2014 12:58:00 PM

Thank you for the nice comment Andy...Noelle

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2014 9:59:00 PM

No problem, you will enjoy it here..((thank you for the comment on my comment)) .Linda

Jt Nyx

Date: 5/25/2014 7:52:00 PM

Another lovely poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. ~Jess~

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/25/2014 6:24:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Noelle. I enjoyed this first poem you have posted. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.

Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/25/2014 6:51:00 PM

Thanks for the welcome and I appreciate the info...Noelle

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/24/2014 11:26:00 PM

Noelle,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/25/2014 2:43:00 PM

Thanks Linda...I appreciate the nice welcome and invitation. Noelle