Destiny and the Stars

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"DESTINY AND THE STARS" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 04 JULY 2017,©

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The mighty stars I asked to tell me where does the destiny of Man lie "What the future holds for him into his heart is found" was their reply! © Demetrios Trifiatis 04 July 2017 HAPPY 4th of JULY to all my American friends!

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/17/2017 11:33:00 AM

Cool prose. Jesus Christ has that answer indeed. Amen

Maria Williams

Date: 7/7/2017 8:46:00 AM

Great words dear Demetrios - I guess we already know the answer in our hearts...Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2017 12:14:00 PM

- The stars came with a wise answer - But, I think we are responsible for our own actions - Beautifully written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/4/2017 3:19:00 PM

That is what I say my dear friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you for your lovely visit!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/4/2017 6:40:00 AM

A perfect pen my friend! Fave :) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/4/2017 8:07:00 AM

How kind and generous you are my dear , Maureen! Thank you so much my good friend!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/4/2017 2:37:00 AM

Beautiful thought and it's so true... Great couplet.... Thanks for sharing...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/4/2017 5:51:00 AM

My enlightened lady,Supraja, thank you so much!

White Wolf

Date: 7/4/2017 2:15:00 AM

A mighty revelation, Demetrios! The story is the teacher and its tellers are the stars! A beautiful couplet, my friend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/4/2017 5:50:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit and comment dear, WW. I do appreciate it my friend!