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"DESTINY AND THE STARS" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 04 JULY 2017,©

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Destiny and the Stars

The mighty stars I asked to tell me where does the destiny of Man lie

"What the future holds for him into his heart is found" was their reply!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
    04 July 2017


 HAPPY 4th of JULY to all my American friends!
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Williams Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Cool prose. Jesus Christ has that answer indeed. Amen
Williams Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Great words dear Demetrios - I guess we already know the answer in our hearts...Maria
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 12:14 PM
- The stars came with a wise answer - But, I think we are responsible for our own actions - Beautifully written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 3:19 PM
That is what I say my dear friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you for your lovely visit!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 6:40 AM
A perfect pen my friend! Fave :) xomo!
Trifiatis Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 8:07 AM
How kind and generous you are my dear , Maureen! Thank you so much my good friend!
Kannan Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:37 AM
Beautiful thought and it's so true... Great couplet.... Thanks for sharing...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 5:51 AM
My enlightened lady,Supraja, thank you so much!
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:15 AM
A mighty revelation, Demetrios! The story is the teacher and its tellers are the stars! A beautiful couplet, my friend
Trifiatis Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 5:50 AM
Thank you for your kind visit and comment dear, WW. I do appreciate it my friend!
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