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Destiny

a ball is hit far boy sitting on a hard plank a glove on his hand

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2014 9:39:00 AM

I would have given this one a One. It's one of the few that paints a truly haiku picture.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2014 5:03:00 AM

A fantastic creative write with images of the sports, frederic. congrats on the win

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/30/2014 9:21:00 PM

love this fun hiaku, Frederic. Congrats on a great win, my friend. Hugs... Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2014 4:55:00 PM

Hi Frederic, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your great win. Wonderful Haiku. Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2014 3:32:00 PM

This is really good; hopeful children wait for fate to bring their way a much dreamt of 'souvenir'. [often comes true!] Congratulations on a merited win! // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 6/30/2014 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/30/2014 12:34:00 PM

thank you Leonora for the interesting contest, it was fun to do

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:19:00 AM

Frederic, well done on the haiku. Enjoyed the image. LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2014 2:13:00 PM

- A winning haiku, Frederic - Very well done !! - Thanks for your faithful reader of my poems - (I have not had time to "soup" this past week. - Have a nice Sunday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/8/2014 7:51:00 AM

This one connects spirit , mind and childhood dreams too. A superb write my friend! BBBBravooooo!!!!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2014 4:57:00 AM

Lovely picture, frederic

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2014 10:29:00 PM

OH YES< I LIKES THIS ONE. (reminded me also of Field of Dreams somehow.)