Destiny

relentless marching
   with no real destination
   the anteater wakes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Merritt Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 1:11 PM
Such a sublime inspiration ! I learn from such as you. Congrats !
Kimathi Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 2:45 AM
A wonderful way of showing an anteater's life in three lines! Applause to you Barbara! ^_^
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 6:23 PM
LOVED it first time I saw it. BIG congrats
Nance Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Grats on your win :)
Jamoner Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Congratz for the win! You deserve it! Wishing you all the Best always! - Doris
A. Sharma Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 5:37 AM
Oh that's awesome Barbara ! Congrats on top win !
Stephens Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:24 AM
Hi Barbara, Congrats on your well deserved win. Regards Theresa xx
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 1:34 AM
A nice thought with deep meaning, Barbara, Congrats on the win,
Smith Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Congrats on top win, Barbara my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
Sietesantos Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Hi Barbara, I extend a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita
Parker Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 2:54 PM
congratulations Barbara, well done
Jerden Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 2:50 PM
Sounds like some people I know... Very good and congratulations, Barbara.
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Ahhh! this is an interesting take on this topic, Barbara. Congrats on your top win. // paul
Michaels Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 2:34 PM
Like this off-the-wall interpretation. Nice write and congrats on your win.
Gasun Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, Barbara for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:36 AM
nice one,, wishing you luck
Fraser Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Fine tribute to the curious looking Anteater. Good luck in the contest Barbara, James :)
Palmer Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 10:11 AM
wow,nice write Barbara
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 5:07 PM
lol, love picturing this
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 6:26 AM
Fantastic flight of imagination, Barbara
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 10:27 PM
HOW COOL is THIS!!!!
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