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Destination Woman

My mama taught me love’s secret route Rushing makes the destination moot Take my time and earn my love passport Apply my mind, find her true love port Rrespect her law and land, don’t grandstand With trust she will let me take her hand Learn to notice more than take a look To be sure, read her whole life scrapbook With mind and ears that are wide open I bring a dose of deep devotion I see past your picture perfect face a True love brings me your soft embrace I chose for love and offered gently, a Rring, my visa right of entry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/26/2017 6:24:00 PM
Oh lovely Jams. Your mama taught you well. And you were wise to listen. Great write. God Bless and a 7 from me. JB
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Just James
Date: 1/27/2017 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Judy ..God bless you too!
Date: 1/25/2017 2:44:00 PM
You have given your critic...now it's my turn.... I love it. Just keep doing what your mama told you.
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Date: 1/27/2017 4:57:00 AM
Thanks you Jean ...will do!
Date: 1/25/2017 9:32:00 AM
Nice sonnet, James. Just when you think you've got it all figured out...
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Date: 1/25/2017 1:32:00 PM
A never ending journey...thanks my friend.
Date: 1/25/2017 2:29:00 AM
A great sonnet, James. Keep that mind open always my friend!
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Just James
Date: 1/25/2017 5:39:00 AM
Thank you my friend!

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