Destination

Days
Arrive
Then depart
The river flows
Into the sunset that ceaselessly glows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 1:00 PM
these are some very good lines here a great and very beautiful poem, i am wondering tho what is that form? i have never heard of it and im curious. =)Jo
Strand Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 12:33 AM
One for my favourites Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Gorelick Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 6:48 PM
This one should be published..its great. BG
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 5:00 PM
yes :) Light & Love
Afful Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 8:55 AM
straight and simple. I like it!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace