Despairity (Triquatrain )
Sands of time, a world sublime
This unforgiving life
Try you may, and though you pray
The pain cuts like a knife
Easier each day, or so they say
Time will heal the saying goes
Tightening rope, losing hope
Despair that no one knows
Wish for good, misunderstood
How could things get worse
Strength diminished, patience finished
Your suffering destiny's curse
Thinking negative, no more to give
Live each day as it's your last
If you were gone, they would go on
Left with memories of the past
Gone but not forgotten, begotten
A shame things turned out this way
When in need, a friend indeed
Came to save the day
Others too busy, drama makes you dizzy
They live their life the same
Should be so glad, their life isn't this sad
And who should carry now the blame
~~~Triquatrain~~~
The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme
with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines
2
and 4 do not.
Rhyme Pattern:
(a,a)
b
(c,c)
b
(d,d)
e
(f,f)
e
(g,g)
h
(i,i)
h
. . . and so on.
The groupings in the parenthesis are on one line separated by a comma. This poem can be
of
any length or subject and does not require perfect meter.
Copyright © Rachel Barnett | Year Posted 2009
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