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Desiring You, Valentine

Sensuous, handsome you! Eternal kisses, those abundant lips. Hypnotic eyes, spell-binding me You are desire, in human disguise! I am your volitional, melting candle. Lost… in your embracing thighs! 2/10/2023
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Ibeh Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 4:45 PM
Very romantic and enchanting write, Pangie:-) Loved it!
Romios Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 5:45 PM
Almost, Happy Valentines Day, Edward, you are accurate in your review. I tried is make it sensuous , in addition, lightly! Valentine hugs, to you, Panagiota
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February 9, 2023 at 8:34 PM
Oh so romantico Pangie, sentimentally delightful… Belle
Romios Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Dear Belle, Only a romantic can appreciate this One. Wno can forget these moments? Not me! I know you are one who appreciates life and the intensity of those we love. Panagiota xo
Fowler Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Very sensual and passionate Pangie. You do write a romantic piece! Linda :)
Romios Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Linda! I used to write tons of romantic stuff when I first came here.this was soooo fun to do again.thank you, for your input Pangie
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February 9, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Hello Panagiota, this is so romantic I feel the passion. Hugs xxx /Darlene/
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February 9, 2023 at 12:49 PM
Hello Panagiota, yes lots of passion here in this poem. You are welcome. Hugs /Darlene/ xxx
Romios Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Dearest Darlene, Thank you for the comment. Yes there is plenty of passion in this one.-)) Your friend, Panagiota
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