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Desire-Rhymed Senryu







             Blazing, heart fire.
             In darkness, we conspire.
             Quench, hot desire.


                      2-1-2021
                         ~ 3 ~


                   Rhymed Senryu

desirelustsensualsenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2021 at 1:34 PM

awesome. I really do love rhymed ones. Maybe they could call them Rhymque!

Panagiota Romios

February 2, 2021 at 2:55 PM

Lol. Not Really, but cute idea! This is the classical rhymed Senryu! As I told Caren, they are a classical form. The rhymed SENRYUS and Haikus are not a "cute" invention. They are not "kus" a term used here. I would like to see us stop inventing names for a form taught in the best universities. Re: by the classical poetry form name. I am aware of the mode in vogue here to turn things..." chic" or cool. Gee~hope I get the point across. Pangie

Robert Pettit

February 2, 2021 at 12:25 PM

I agree with everything everyone else has said about your work.

Panagiota Romios

February 2, 2021 at 2:58 PM

Hi Robert! How lovely and supportive a comment. Thank you, much.)) Hugs, Pangie xx

Judy Ball

February 2, 2021 at 11:31 AM

Nicely done Pangie. God Bless, JB

Panagiota Romios

February 2, 2021 at 11:38 AM

Good Afternoon, Judy. Thrilled you like this...so do I. Blessings. Pangie

Tom Cunningham

February 2, 2021 at 10:50 AM

You write these so well Pangie, a lot said in a few words. Tom

Panagiota Romios

February 2, 2021 at 11:36 AM

Thanks dear, Tom! I prefer this way. It packs a punch)) Pangie

Caren Krutsinger

February 1, 2021 at 7:36 PM

A rhyming senryu! I do not think I have ever seen one. Wow! Burning me up!

Panagiota Romios

February 2, 2021 at 8:07 AM

Caren, I have written many. See my list of 1900 Poems! Woo- Hoo! Try rhymed Haikus and Rhymed Senryus. I think you'd be great at these.))) All start with capitol letters. Unlike the Haikus or Senryus that overflow here. Yes! Those few words..,call the fire engine! ))) Hugs, Pangie xx