Kim Van Breda Poet Rictameter

Desire

Desire
His wide shoulders
Flowed to narrowed waist
Her eyes locked on his vast manhood
Muscled sculpture captured smooth perfection
Her tongue caressed his lower lip
Spreading thighs he entered
Fulfilling her
Desire





© Kim van Breda – 22 October 2014

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Just James April 14, 2016 at 2:26 AM Im blushing!! But I like it!

Timothy Hicks October 27, 2014 at 1:47 AM I'm finding about all sorts of sides of you - you're no one trick pony, Miss Kim! Nice to get glimpses of the different angles. I don't believe it was over-the-top, but like RJ was saying - a few carefully chosen words can make all the difference.

Tim Smith October 26, 2014 at 11:03 AM We know where to find you if you are banned...but I think you haven't overstepped any boundaries. You are spicing up the soup...hehe

Maurice Yvonne October 26, 2014 at 5:05 AM There is nothing but beauty contained in this measured write. Sexuality is a vital part of life. How can you write relavent work if you ignore it. This is an excellent graceful poem.