Desire

Desire His wide shoulders Flowed to narrowed waist Her eyes locked on his vast manhood Muscled sculpture captured smooth perfection Her tongue caressed his lower lip Spreading thighs he entered Fulfilling her Desire © Kim van Breda – 22 October 2014

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Just James

Date: 4/14/2016 2:26:00 AM

Im blushing!! But I like it!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/27/2014 1:47:00 AM

I'm finding about all sorts of sides of you - you're no one trick pony, Miss Kim! Nice to get glimpses of the different angles. I don't believe it was over-the-top, but like RJ was saying - a few carefully chosen words can make all the difference.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/26/2014 11:03:00 AM

We know where to find you if you are banned...but I think you haven't overstepped any boundaries. You are spicing up the soup...hehe

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/26/2014 5:05:00 AM

There is nothing but beauty contained in this measured write. Sexuality is a vital part of life. How can you write relavent work if you ignore it. This is an excellent graceful poem.