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Deserted Cocoon

he was the crusty cocoon covering the caterpillar boneless, yet filled with vibrant life, and belittling the very source of her security, and the sacrifices the casing made to transform frailty and un-beauty later to lighter flight, much fluttering with splendour of myriad colours as of acrylic paint and clear-coat for weathering both the hot sun and the wet rain before seizing the right moment to flirt with another and never return to the cocoon, the first house that remains deserted, forever a broken heart, blood now dried, able to give no more life, mere useless clothing, like the shed skin of a snake now escaped

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/17/2014 5:12:00 PM
Henry, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Linda. I will have a fun week and you too have the same. With warm greetings. Henry
Date: 3/17/2014 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the awesome write, henry
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Date: 3/17/2014 5:37:00 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta.
Date: 3/10/2014 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Anne, Linda and Skat for the warm welcome you expressed to embrace me into Poetry Soup. Thanks also for the positive comments you posted. I hope to learn, to grow and find my satisfaction in the path of poetry as I swim in Poetry Soup.
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:45:00 PM
Epic poem, Henry , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2014 8:30:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Henry :) - I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2014 8:10:00 AM
Henry, I like how deep and light you revealed the new path. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and offer positive feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to getting to know you and your poetry :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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