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Deserted

DESERTED 
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                             death is not dessert
                      after seasonal parties

                ! revenge of an ageless fire !

     birthday candles all burnt out
wishes made on earth are ash

8/41/2017

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Date: 8/4/2017 6:15:00 PM
A well crafted Tanka, Kim...god bless...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2017 6:28:00 PM
Thanks, WW!

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