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Desert Wine

Chilled or warm this life is so worn
bitter sweet or sour tart the ache of my old heart
life's aroma giving years of sitting while waiting
to be young again like a grape that's been blend

Across the desert I swirl of childhood as a young girl
champagne sand at night with the red moon I bloom
unbreakable glass so tipsy and free like fine Chablis
tiny bubbles flutter through my veins like a cork no longer constrain.

T Reams  9/2015 copyright   7th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Zubair Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 1:39 PM
Nice molding of seasons and nature with a pinch oflife at all stages. Bravo
Reams Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Thank you very much Samiha for the very nice comment.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 2:08 AM
Wonderful write n win Tammy! Big Congrats!
Reams Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 7:14 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma.
A  Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Tammy, nice win. SKAT
Reams Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 6:48 PM
Thank you Skat.
Nance Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Thank you for a great entry! :)
Reams Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 6:48 PM
Thank you Casarah!
Tor Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 6:09 AM
Tammy this is one of my favorites. Congratulations on your win.
Reams Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 7:02 AM
Thank you Michael. Have a great day!
Lindsay Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 10:11 AM
How sweet - and I loved the last line, so introspective. ;)
Reams Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Bill for the great comment.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Lovelyimagery Tammy good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Reams Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Jan. Hugs back to you.
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