Desert Dreams

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This Sahara Desert Elopement Inspiration is Romantic Moroccan Wanderlust  Wedding Goals | Junebug Weddings


Calm and soundless  
         escapes of 
           beautiful sceneries   
                                      dormant, 
                 as the Pharaoh's daughter 
BY early morning dawn !
 
Cool starlit darkness, 
               landscapes of subtle colors, 
                                         mulched in softest light ...
The sky slowly transitions
                    from deep blue to hues of pink, 
                                               orange  *
                                                        gold * 
As the air crisp and cool carries the scent of dry earth 
                          to your nostrils, one grain of sand at a time 
                                  Hints of blooming desert 
like flowers falling on you,
               after a long awaited rainfall (inhale) it 
  
                                                 Evening arrives, 
the dreamer, 
                                 lost in a desert dream 
arrives at dusk's door. 
 
Looping colors of terracotta and rustic brown 

                            Closer to the Nile the heart is seen, 
                   seeking and searching,  
For Sacred Rivers that flow

Inside the dreamers mind, 
                          the soft winds blow, 
just before they settle in, 
                    setting the world on fire with, 
 
                      AFTERGLOW !!!

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Date: 8/6/2025 4:29:00 PM
don't know how I missed this lovely gem of a poem yesterday. Loved the colorful imagery and the romance. Nicely done, dear Rose, hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/6/2025 6:29:00 PM
I so love your new avatar Sara, thankyou for liking my poem, God bless you both :)
Date: 8/6/2025 3:45:00 PM
Valentino! The kids today are too young to know such old romantic features. Why I enjoy living so close to the desert, just a skip and throw from my diggings. 116 today in Phoenix. Beautiful, enchanting writing as usual...from one who has obviously had a past life in ancient Egypt.
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Date: 8/6/2025 6:29:00 PM
I am definitely an old soul Joe, :) can't wait to see what else life brings my way, praying for mainstay
Date: 8/6/2025 9:54:00 AM
Your poem creates a serene and evocative desert-dreamscape, beautifully transitioning through morning into evening, with vivid sensory detail and emotional resonance.
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Date: 8/6/2025 11:54:00 AM
Serenity of soul and spirit is what we all strive to achieve Jay, if the poems speaks to you that way then I accomplished my goal as a writer of fantasy. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 8/6/2025 2:18:00 AM
- So beautifully described in your words, Vie Rose... a view you will never forget :) - hugs
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Date: 8/6/2025 11:53:00 AM
not one I want to Anne lol, thanks for your lovely presence here, much appreciated :)
Date: 8/6/2025 12:21:00 AM
Such a vivid, dreamy piece—felt like I was walking through the desert at dawn and dusk. Loved the sensory depth and the meditative pace. That afterglow ending is just perfect!
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Date: 8/6/2025 11:52:00 AM
if my poem was able to take you on a journey of peace and self revelation then I am glad Rowena, have a blessed day, :)
Date: 8/5/2025 4:54:00 PM
Very nice read! A favorite! Have a nice day lovely rose :-)
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Date: 8/5/2025 6:10:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem Abdullah, thanks for your visit today :)
Date: 8/5/2025 4:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your Light Poetry, Rose. The imagery was excellent, and I like the way you sprinkled colors throughout. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/5/2025 6:09:00 PM
Nice way to relax writing poetry of far away places that we wished we had visited, :)
Date: 8/5/2025 4:17:00 PM
simply the title is so inspiring, your poem works wonderfully, waw, impressive, thanks poet
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Date: 8/5/2025 6:09:00 PM
Thank you dear Yann for showing up hope all is well !
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