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Desert

Desert Dry yet not arid Droughty water is expensive Dusty hot tranquility salty humid breeze Dabble and blue waves seagulls Damp lustrous so wide Deep

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/20/2023 5:43:00 PM

Dear Abdullah, a beautiful diamante composed with lovely imagery and poetic finesse. A smooth transition from desert to ocean. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/20/2023 9:28:00 PM

Yes so true. The desert and ocean are different yet alike.. a very clever pairing, my friend :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/20/2023 9:09:00 PM

Hello :-) Thank you dear Susan! Both have differ in some respects. Yet, they are alike in some other respects, they are wide, having mostly one color, dangerous.. Warmest wishes to you too lovely respected Susan. Have a wonderful day! AA