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I took out my new words Journal and looked at words I have saved and with the idea of there you go...etc I tried to make it seem that life has a pre-set destiny  a determinismn if you will and that even if we take a different 
path by exercising our free will we end up at the same finishing point, regardless.
I once read a very interesting book
It is called "Freedom Evolves" and it delves into this argument with the latest findings in quantum physics. 
If you want to read it it is byDaniel C Dennet.
http://www.edge.org/3rd_culture/bios/dennett.html made my title last of all and once again it is from words I have found over time.

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Disembogue-dis·em·bogue    (d s m-b g
v. dis·em·bogued, dis·em·bogu·ing, dis·em·bogues
v. intr.
To flowout or empty, as water from a channel:

FromSpanish desembogue, mouth of a river, from desembocar, to flow out  : des-, reversal (from Latin dis-. See dis-)+ embocar, to put into the mouth (en-,in from Latinin-; see in-2+ boca, mouth from Latin bucca, cheek).]

dis em·bogue ment n.

 tantmieux 'so much the better'.
So my title means -  the more we flow away from one another ,when we return we have more to share and that the outpouring is a restoration in itself.

Desembogue - Tant Mieux Behold where you travel where I travel where our forever travels as if spinning at a level of molecules we have always been mixed Our short life span though a fantastical picture unfolds together like a flower in time lapse we journey you one way me another like star children Destiny, detail, doom kismet akin a poem with a fixed form errant, we traverse in search of wisdom We agonize over all that is opposite malentendu, malificent, mock sun, mock moon full circle until across a river of un-remembering there you are there I am as if we always knew I have posted in the ABOUT THIS POEM box to explain the title.

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Date: 8/16/2013 3:34:00 PM
Je le crois. C'est tant mieux.
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Date: 6/14/2013 9:04:00 AM
Well done imagism is a tough style to pen. This is awesome I like :). -Edward
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