Descendent of Eve

"Descendent of Eve"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

As she walked through the door, I recall a shortness of breath
My heartbeat fluttered, my palms moistened, my mind drew a blank, but no pain was felt
My mouth became dry, and my eyes and ears became lost in her motion
And with only a glance, the sway of her hips became the muse for my every notion
After closer examination, sweat, in the form of a single drip
Made its way down my forehead as the glass approached her lips
Then, the rumbling of my stomach, the butterflies were on the move
Because my eyes had never touched legs that appeared to be oh so smooth
I wanted to get up, but I could hear the buckling of my knees
And the unmentionable, it was like what happens to water if you let it freeze
Now that was many years ago, but like yesterday is what it seems
Because ever since that moment, she has been featured in all of my dreams
To her sight, I have become addicted, that's the strongest word I can think of
For me, it only took a glance, and I, instantly, fell in Love
I Love her hair, I Love her toes, don't get me started on the things in between
She is God's Greatest Creation, next to Him, her being reigns supreme
And now that I'm a man, on her curves, I am still dependent
That's the only way I can explain my jealousy of the infant
Addiction, desire, infatuation or lust, you can call it whatever you believe
But I would go crazy without her, I'm in Love with the descendent of Eve

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/27/2016 7:59:00 AM
Great poetry my friend. I too love a certain descendant of Eve. She warms my heart, feeds my soul and make my happiness her desired goal. I am blessed. God gave Adam a MOST beautiful gift. A7
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:30:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Date: 2/12/2016 3:34:00 PM
your canvas outshines with vibrant colors Hugs dear friend
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:17:00 AM
Aha! '...the things in between' huh? Very well scribed my friend, with slick couplet rhyming to boot! Well done!! Keith
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:22:00 PM
I like both the apple and descendants of Eve whose beauty, the gifted verses may retrieve.
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