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Derelict Beauty

The wheels of time frozen, the vines intrude weathered enclosure whispering tales of yore resplendent in the setting sun, a majestic edifice © Nadiya (15 March '15) * Placed 5th in the contest 'Three Line Poetry' by Debbie Guzzi on 17 March 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2015 9:32:00 PM

Thank you for the reply once again... PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2015 12:45:00 PM

- Nad, congratulations on your win !!! - I wish you a happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:39:00 AM

Thank you dear friend... wish a happy Easter as well... hugs, nad

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/20/2015 6:15:00 AM

wonderfully scribed. poesy.. congrats!

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:40:00 AM

Thank you Nette.. hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:43:00 PM

Congratulations... PD

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:41:00 AM

Thank you PD:)

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:06:00 PM

POESY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:41:00 AM

Thank you SKAT

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/18/2015 9:10:00 PM

Beautiful, Nad. I can see it in my mind...very good descriptive write. Congratulations! Hugs! :) Kim PS. You may want some laughs, go to John Wulf's page featuring Manila...

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:52:00 AM

Thank you very much Kim for the continued support... ve been busy of late... sorry about the latte reply.. got a lot of catching up to do... definitely gonnaa visit Jacks and Johns poems... hugs. Nad

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2015 1:55:00 PM

I enjoyed seeing your lovely entry into the contest. Congrats on your win, dear.

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:48:00 AM

Thank you dear friend.. sorry for the late reply

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2015 10:53:00 AM

Well done Nadiya! Very descriptive write and a worthy winner. Congratulations! // paul

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:49:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul, I appreciate your support... sorry about the late reply.. nad

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/17/2015 8:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Nad! I love this exceptional piece. Really lovely. Hugs, Kimberly

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:38:00 AM

Thank you Kimberly... appreciate your comment... glad you liked it.. hugs

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/17/2015 8:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Nad. I love the imagery you create with your well-chosen words. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2015 6:01:00 PM

three wonderful lines - many congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:37:00 AM

Thank you Jan ..hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/17/2015 6:06:00 AM

Beautiful descriptions. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:36:00 AM

Thank you Ravi.. sorry for the late reply... appreciate your nice words .. ,nad

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/17/2015 12:56:00 AM

Your words come a wise and beautiful place, Nad! Best wishes and hugs, Rhonda

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:34:00 AM

Thank you Rhonda.. sorry for the late reply... I have been busy lately... appreciate your comments and support throughout .. hugs,nad

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/16/2015 7:38:00 PM

Sublimely penned Nad! 7

Poesy Relish
Date: 4/3/2015 2:32:00 AM

Thank you Connie.. sorry for the late reply... appreciate your comment and support .. hugs,nad

Constance La France

Date: 3/16/2015 2:53:00 PM

Poesy, this is a beautiful verse for the contest, best of luck and thanks for your thoughtful words on my poem, rest now . . .

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/16/2015 2:57:00 PM

Thank you very much...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/15/2015 10:18:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery and expression here!

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 11:13:00 PM

Thank you Arthur for stopping by :)

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/15/2015 6:51:00 PM

I love the imagery. All the best in the contest.

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 10:34:00 PM

Thank you very much dear... appreciate it

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2015 5:05:00 PM

wonderful descriptions

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 10:33:00 PM

Thank you Jack

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/15/2015 3:56:00 PM

truly golden pen nadyia very beautifully painted dear friend wishing you a blessed evening

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 10:33:00 PM

Thank you dear Liam... have a nice week ahead.. nad

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 3:39:00 PM

Wonderful 3 lines... SKAT

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 10:13:00 PM

Thank you very much Skat

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2015 2:19:00 PM

Very poetic work..I enjoyed reading this one ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 2:22:00 PM

Thank you very much Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2015 6:57:00 AM

- Dear Nadia, what beautiful poem - thanks! - I wish you a lovely Sunday :) - (Ps. Block "Monica" !!!! - error !!!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise....wish you a lovely weekend as well... I was wondering about the comments from this person... guess i will block him or her... lov n hugs... nad

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/15/2015 3:55:00 AM

OH WOMAN!!! What a beautiful write. You are SO talented. :) Loved this piece, Nadia...It's me, Eileen...Felt like changing my name for various reasons...Hugs

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 6:19:00 AM

A stunning new avatar and a new name too... loved it Eileen... and thank you for your sweet words:)... hope you are doing good.... lov n hugs, nad...