Poesy Relish Poet Verse

Derelict Beauty

The wheels of time frozen, the vines intrude

weathered enclosure whispering tales of yore

resplendent in the setting sun, a majestic edifice

© Nadiya (15 March '15)

* Placed 5th in the contest 'Three Line Poetry' by Debbie Guzzi on 17 March 2015

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Poet Destroyer A April 4, 2015 at 9:32 PM Thank you for the reply once again... PD

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2015 at 12:45 PM - Nad, congratulations on your win !!! - I wish you a happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:39 AM Thank you dear friend... wish a happy Easter as well... hugs, nad

Nette Onclaud March 20, 2015 at 6:15 AM wonderfully scribed. poesy.. congrats! Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:40 AM Thank you Nette.. hugs

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2015 at 11:43 PM Congratulations... PD Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:41 AM Thank you PD:)

Skat A March 18, 2015 at 11:06 PM POESY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~ Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:41 AM Thank you SKAT

Kp Nunez March 18, 2015 at 9:10 PM Beautiful, Nad. I can see it in my mind...very good descriptive write. Congratulations! Hugs! :) Kim PS. You may want some laughs, go to John Wulf's page featuring Manila... Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:52 AM Thank you very much Kim for the continued support... ve been busy of late... sorry about the latte reply.. got a lot of catching up to do... definitely gonnaa visit Jacks and Johns poems... hugs. Nad

Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2015 at 1:55 PM I enjoyed seeing your lovely entry into the contest. Congrats on your win, dear. Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:48 AM Thank you dear friend.. sorry for the late reply

Paul Callus March 18, 2015 at 10:53 AM Well done Nadiya! Very descriptive write and a worthy winner. Congratulations! // paul Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:49 AM Thank you very much Paul, I appreciate your support... sorry about the late reply.. nad

Kim Shaw March 17, 2015 at 8:17 PM Congratulations on your win, Nad! I love this exceptional piece. Really lovely. Hugs, Kimberly Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:38 AM Thank you Kimberly... appreciate your comment... glad you liked it.. hugs

Sandra Haight March 17, 2015 at 8:02 PM Congratulations on your win, Nad. I love the imagery you create with your well-chosen words. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison March 17, 2015 at 6:01 PM three wonderful lines - many congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs Jan xx Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:37 AM Thank you Jan ..hugs

Ravi Sathasivam March 17, 2015 at 6:06 AM Beautiful descriptions. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:36 AM Thank you Ravi.. sorry for the late reply... appreciate your nice words .. ,nad

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 17, 2015 at 12:56 AM Your words come a wise and beautiful place, Nad! Best wishes and hugs, Rhonda Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:34 AM Thank you Rhonda.. sorry for the late reply... I have been busy lately... appreciate your comments and support throughout .. hugs,nad

Connie Marcum Wong March 16, 2015 at 7:38 PM Sublimely penned Nad! 7 Poesy Relish April 3, 2015 at 2:32 AM Thank you Connie.. sorry for the late reply... appreciate your comment and support .. hugs,nad

Constance La France March 16, 2015 at 2:53 PM Poesy, this is a beautiful verse for the contest, best of luck and thanks for your thoughtful words on my poem, rest now . . . Poesy Relish March 16, 2015 at 2:57 PM Thank you very much...

Arthur Vaso March 15, 2015 at 10:18 PM Such beautiful imagery and expression here! Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 11:13 PM Thank you Arthur for stopping by :)

Njeri Hunjeri March 15, 2015 at 6:51 PM I love the imagery. All the best in the contest. Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 10:34 PM Thank you very much dear... appreciate it

Jack Horne March 15, 2015 at 5:05 PM wonderful descriptions Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 10:33 PM Thank you Jack

Liam Mcdaid March 15, 2015 at 3:56 PM truly golden pen nadyia very beautifully painted dear friend wishing you a blessed evening Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 10:33 PM Thank you dear Liam... have a nice week ahead.. nad

Skat A March 15, 2015 at 3:39 PM Wonderful 3 lines... SKAT Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 10:13 PM Thank you very much Skat

Sara Kendrick March 15, 2015 at 2:19 PM Very poetic work..I enjoyed reading this one ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 2:22 PM Thank you very much Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2015 at 6:57 AM - Dear Nadia, what beautiful poem - thanks! - I wish you a lovely Sunday :) - (Ps. Block "Monica" !!!! - error !!!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 7:07 AM Thank you Anne Lise....wish you a lovely weekend as well... I was wondering about the comments from this person... guess i will block him or her... lov n hugs... nad

Eileen Manassian March 15, 2015 at 3:55 AM OH WOMAN!!! What a beautiful write. You are SO talented. :) Loved this piece, Nadia...It's me, Eileen...Felt like changing my name for various reasons...Hugs Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 6:19 AM A stunning new avatar and a new name too... loved it Eileen... and thank you for your sweet words:)... hope you are doing good.... lov n hugs, nad...