Depths of Moon

I do not want sweet pretty poems
Of unmarked sky where fancies roam
Give me the bones of ghosts to haunt
Sweet pretty poems, I do not want

I've had enough of gilded gold
Whose pretense of value is sold
Until blunt plainness calls its bluff
Of gilded gold, I've had enough

My bent soul knows dark luscious gloom
Exotic agony which blooms
In savage tears of volcanoes
Dark luscious gloom, my bent soul knows

In want I wait for depths of moon
Alluring beyond shallow noon
Mystique only midnight creates
For depths of moon, in want I wait.

6/05/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Wow! I hadn't read this gem earlier. Indeed you've made this form look easy with the natural flow of words. The best part is that those are some really honest emotions which I totally agree with. Congratulations on getting a top win Michelle! Keep writing and inspiring :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 12:58 PM
Excellent poem with perfect mix of darkness and beauty, Michelle. This is the kind if poetry I love...a fave! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Watt Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 5:25 PM
As I hinted at in my previous comment, I love the line "Until blunt plainness calls its bluff". Nice to see some justice done for this excellent poem 2nd time around. Enjoyed having another read. Enjoy your day, Michelle
Kauffman Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 3:12 PM
A powerful call for realness of life, of emotion and depth in writing, Michelle! Amen to you and congratulations, my friend!
Mcgee Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 1:54 PM
This is full of depth and allure. Glad you got a top win this time.
Hamilton Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Looks like I'm becoming a fan, another top win for you Michelle, hard to understand this got an N/A.
Faulkner Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, John, I am pleased you liked it-
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Excellent write Michelle..my favorite lines:..In want I wait the depths of moon Alluring beyond shallow noon.
Watt Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 7:55 PM
I will be plain and blunt, Michelle. This is excellent poetry. Like Tom said, you make the challenges of the swap seem so easy and smooth. Good word choices to describe the superficial: gilded, pretense, shallow. Also, the dark: my bent soul, dark luscious gloom, and (my favorite), savage years of volcanoes. Great writing; I think this deserves a high placement ~ John
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Aw yeah. Ffffffave. x
Canerdy Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Michelle, this is so beautiful, descriptive, and moving. Janice
Leffanta Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Moon shadows certainly stir the imagination! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 1:24 PM
it reads so so beautifully Michelle I enjoy sweet pretty poems especially ones which contain humour - will leave the deep dark writes for others :-) good luck in the contest you nailed this challenge!:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Not the easiest of forms Michelle, you've made it look easy, well written Tom
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