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Deprived of your Love Contest

What is the shore without the sea Aimlessly wondering watery dreams Deferred desolate depressed empty Is how I am without love in me That one true love for which one is blind Without it there is darkness blackest of times Is like a blue bird without a heart song No white wind of romance to carry it on Without love there is nothing to fight for No reason to desire life would be a bore Amethyst art would starve forever more No apple of the eye to amber adore Without love music would be dead The humming of machinery could be heard instead Humanity would die off no kids born Feelings would be liability and scorned Without love I am an empty cocoa shell With no inspiration no wishing well No dedication or passion that bleeds That is what lack of love does to me

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Date: 4/30/2025 1:23:00 AM
"Without love I am an empty cocoa shell With no inspiration no wishing well" So very true dear Karen. Love is the force that propels us forward. With out the fuel of love, life will be like a broken vehicle, discarded in a junkyard. Beautifully written.
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/30/2025 3:56:00 AM
Thank you Valsa! You are kind!
Date: 4/29/2025 2:25:00 PM
Karen, I agree it’s a wonderful write, you’ve written exactly what lack of love does and what it needs. All the best for the Love Contest… Beryl
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/29/2025 3:44:00 PM
Really? Wow thanks Beryl!
Date: 4/29/2025 11:34:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write. Great Ending.... Love your line, "Without love music would be dead." So Very True... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/29/2025 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Paula! Yes it’s for contest.

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