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April 29, 2025

"Deprived Of Your Love" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Life doesn’t feel the same, My Darling, Deprived of your passionate love, Each and every day aimlessly drags on, Each and every day feels dreary and treacherous! Days were joyfully enchanting, nights were supremely blissful, Never realized parting was so acutely hard! But came a time there was turbulence in The relationship, a dark cloud covered our horizon! My heart sank, tears uncontrollably filled my eyes, But decision, right for both of us, needed to be taken, although my heart shattered like a broken-winged bird's, I stood still - not letting destiny drown me with grief! Deprived of your love - may not be fully true, Pure Love is a gift we rarely receive in a lifetime, I still love you…Love has no end, But cruel fate crushed the life we yearned for!

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Date: 4/29/2025 9:26:00 PM
So very sad, Malabika. You are a romantic at heart, an eternal love for your Romeo, you were ripped apart. Poetry so gentle and eloquence taboot! Gl to you~ Anaya
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/30/2025 3:31:00 PM
Hi Anaya, Thank you for reading my humble effort! Imagined a girl being ripped apart, not really my own story! Best wishes to you - your poetry is brilliant!

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