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April 29, 2025

"Deprived Of Your Love" Poetry Contest

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Deprived Of Your Love

Life doesn’t feel the same, My Darling,
Deprived of your passionate love,
Each and every day aimlessly drags on,
Each and every day feels dreary and treacherous!

Days were joyfully enchanting, nights were supremely blissful,
Never realized parting was so acutely hard!
But came a time there was turbulence in
The relationship, a dark cloud covered our horizon!

My heart sank, tears uncontrollably filled my eyes,
But decision, right for both of us, needed to be taken,
although my heart shattered like a broken-winged bird's,
I stood still - not letting grief drown me miserably!

Deprived of your love - is that fully true!
Pure Love is a gift we rarely receive in a lifetime, 
We still love each other…I believe, Love does not end,
Cruel fate decides the eventual direction of our path!
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Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 7:25 AM
You painted a perfect picture of the marriage life or even those in log term relationships experiencing such…your words were beautifully expressed throughout this piece!!! Enjoyed!
Anaya Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 9:26 PM
So very sad, Malabika. You are a romantic at heart, an eternal love for your Romeo, you were ripped apart. Poetry so gentle and eloquence taboot! Gl to you~ Anaya
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 3:31 PM
Hi Anaya, Thank you for reading my humble effort! Imagined a girl being ripped apart, not really my own story! Best wishes to you - your poetry is brilliant!
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