Depression

In this life of pain and sorrow,
with each day,another tomorrow.
Do I really have to get out of bed?
When the new days morn only fills me with dread.
Why was I created? 
Why was I born?
I don't laugh and smile,
I seethe and scorn.
I truly long to be carefree
but depression's got it's hooks in me.
Struggling through each day is tough,
I've had all I can take,
I've had enough.
Now, you might be thinking suicide
but it's not for me,
I have my pride.
Pride is positive,
so you see,
there is still some hope for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/3/2014 8:38:00 PM
Having suffered with depression for so many years this is a great poem its a battle we can either win or lose hold on to the positives in life you will always win
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 3/3/2014 9:35:00 PM
Thank you Quin x
Date: 2/26/2014 2:15:00 PM
I believe you are trying - successfully - to pass on a positive message. Nobody can lead a carefree life, problems lurk round every corner, but it's up to us to be strong and look at life with hope and belief.
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 2/26/2014 3:38:00 PM
Hi Paul, Thank you,I am glad you see my poem in this way as that's exactly the message I am trying to convey.
Date: 2/25/2014 9:31:00 PM
I have been there many times Jenny so my heart goes out to you but there is always hope..please don't give up ...luv,Deb
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Date: 2/25/2014 7:01:00 PM
wow so powerful Jen sent shivers down my spine. Your friend Jan xx
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 2/25/2014 8:54:00 PM
Thank you xx ( I'm not really depressed xx,it's just a poem xx )
Date: 2/25/2014 5:30:00 PM
Keep writing, it's fulfilling and releases emotions. This is a magnificent poem, remain hopeful Jenny. - Mike
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 2/25/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Mike x
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