Depression

happiness is something we all want and think we have but we don't because 
there is always 
going to be something to take it from us. we can always say we are happy but 
the truth is 
deep within all of us we are never happy. happiness should be something we 
feel inside our 
hearts but happiness is dangerous because when you have it something will 
come and 
destroy it and then leave you lying in a pool of your tears and now your heart is 
broken. now 
your heart is broken and may never heal and there is no force in the world that 
can fix it not 
even love.where the heck is all the happiness we never seem to be able to find 
it but we can 
lose it really easily it is as if the world just sucks all the happiness from us like 
some kind of 
leach. true happiness come when you die for only then do you have no 
happiness to lose 
you have no heart to break.happiness is fake and if you think you have it just 
wait 
something will take it from you. i feel for all you people who have had your 
hearts broken i 
have to.life sucks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 1/13/2010 9:25:00 AM
good write but chin up! you gotta live til u die.
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:41:00 PM
Dylan, welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes with your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:10:00 PM
Interesting writing. Even in the mist of unhappiness I have joy bubbling up inside. Sara
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Date: 8/2/2009 9:46:00 PM
There are days when I feel just like this..but there are moments of joy if we can only hold on. very deep write. it was hard to read but Im glad i did.
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