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Depression (True Story)

My depression grows everyday, It started as a come and go, It decided to stay and create a black cloud, All I can do, Is sit and hope, Wish and dream, Cry and smile, I fake these looks for my family, They feel responsible, Like they caused my pain, Truth is, No one caused it, It just came, because a boy, I loved, Died, All alone, All my fault, Not being there, I was so stupid, So young, I yelled at him, Told him i hated him, Told him to leave me and never come back, His friends came and got him, They drove him home, He decided to come back to see me, My fault, My fight caused, His death, He tried to get to me, A car smashed his, Head trama, Lungs smashed, Face scared, Last words said, I hate you, I rushed to his side, Last thing i hear, I love you, Never forget me, He passed away, In my arms, Me in tears, Unable to tell him, I love you too, Never could I forget you, Your my heart, My soul, You'll always be with me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/17/2012 6:48:00 AM
Hi...reading some of my old poems...this one took me way back... A very sad poem....always..pd
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Date: 12/24/2011 6:34:00 PM
Very heart wrenching...I am praying for you..He knew you loved him. You were with him at the end..
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Date: 4/25/2010 6:56:00 PM
A very sad read,,Irma
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Date: 3/25/2010 11:04:00 AM
I am deeply moved by you .I wish you could give me some of your depression. You posted your poem so emotional, all I can do for you is ask God. Why? In time you will heel. I have no regretes reading your poem.
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:34:00 AM
omg this poem is amazing it made me tear up feeling what you might have gone through with this piece of life omg i love this poem good job keep writtin
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Date: 3/11/2010 9:31:00 AM
Ohmigosh, this makes me wanna cry soooo bad and if i wasnt in school right now i would. i love it i love it i love it. and he knows you love him too. please dont beat yourself up for it...ohmigosh i miss Jacob sooooooo much ),: huggs < / 3
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Date: 3/9/2010 3:19:00 PM
That is a very emotional write...He told you that he loved you to me that says that he forgave you...I can understand that you could not say that you loved him also at the time...I am sure that he felt your caring when you held him whatever that care was be it sorrow for what you said last, sorrow for the accident, or that you really loved him..If this doesn't get better you should seek professional help. Sara
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Date: 3/9/2010 3:06:00 PM
This really just attached to my head, I read it this morning, but I've read it like twice since then. I'd love to see more, so keep it coming, and I'm really, really, really sorry this happened... Here for support, luv. Message me if you need it.
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Date: 3/9/2010 1:14:00 PM
you really caught my attention with this poem. i know how it feels to lose somebody you found out you truely loved and to see your whole world crash and burn right in front of your eyes. hope you recover.--amanda
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:10:00 PM
my depression came in waves. 300 times a day that shadow would fall on me, and drive me to my knees while i was still standing. sundays i sat in the chior stand all teary eyed the whole time my mom, the preacher preached. then i asked God to help stop it, and little by little He did. you'll get better someday. john
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:44:00 AM
I'M SO SORRY BUT YOU HAVE TO STOP BLAMING YOURSELF OR YOUR PAIN WILL NEVER HEAL FALESHIA
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:42:00 AM
This is very sad. I hope you can get over your depression, dear. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:27:00 AM
So heart wrenching, I'm sorry for your suffering.
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