Depressed

I'm too stressed

but they say I'm depressed.

Everyone looks at me and stares.

No one even cares.

I want to get away from here.

Which way do I steer?

Why are people  cruel?

Good thing I'm almost out of school.

My words are jumbled.

My whole world has crumbled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/4/2015 5:33:00 AM
concise and refreshingly honest, good job kay. by the way if you're a poet you'll never be out of school.
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Kay Cassio
Date: 3/4/2015 10:11:00 AM
Aha yea writing is my hobby and thanks for the comment!
Date: 3/4/2015 12:14:00 AM
Well expressed write. Although I must say people will always be people, Stay clear of those ones that hurt you and forgive them as well. Easier said than done I know, your world will be okay soon my dear.
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Kay Cassio
Date: 3/4/2015 10:10:00 AM
Thanks for the encouraging words and for the read :)
Date: 3/3/2015 9:59:00 PM
I hope that writing about it will help..I suffer from depression at times and I know how dark it can be. Glad to read your poem and hope you keep writing. BG
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Kay Cassio
Date: 3/3/2015 10:52:00 PM
Writing helps me a lot, especially since I can't find the right words to say so I just write it out. Thanks BG for the comment and for the words.
Date: 3/3/2015 8:52:00 PM
In this poem, I can vividly draw a picture of the character showing deep emotions, certainly intense. This is nice indeed! :) If this is based on your personal story, I will say to you there are many people who really care, and much more, love. Thanks for sharing your poem! God bless.
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Date: 3/3/2015 8:51:00 PM
I this poem, I can vividly draw a picture of the character showing deep emotions, certainly intense. This is nice indeed! :) If this is based on your personal story, I will say to you there are many people who really care, and much more, love. Thanks for sharing your poem! God bless.
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Kay Cassio
Date: 3/3/2015 9:11:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, I know people care but sometimes it feels like they don't.
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