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Depressed

Deliver the speech to avoid an explosion Depress animosities rightful emotions Decapitate that which would delay our cause Desire the path made by the Lord Disable powers to fight and defraud Deposit the heroism that history records Deserve the gifts of obediences reward

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/30/2023 10:59:00 AM

Very nicely composed. I appreciate. Blessings

Valsa George

Date: 9/11/2023 10:54:00 PM

Animosities can lead one to depression. Love is the antidote to depression. Powerfully penned, dear friend.

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/11/2023 10:19:00 PM

Hope this does well for you, pleased to read Today.'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2023 3:26:00 PM

Lots of great lines to start with D for depression. I wonder if it's ok to do pleiades with more than six syllables per line. I think I read somewhere that it's ok, but the sponsors here always do with only six, which makes it so limiting. This way you did it helped you to make more complete thoughts.

The Situation
Date: 9/11/2023 6:08:00 PM

Two sets of instructions I read both. Used the one that worked.

Curie Stark

Date: 9/9/2023 1:10:00 AM

I couldn't have thought depression could be described so hauntingly beautiful

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/8/2023 12:10:00 PM

Creatively expressed one from of depression. I enjoyed reading your work today. If for a contest it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 9/8/2023 11:18:00 AM

Depress animosity's rightful emotions... I've had to do that this week. Tit for tat is so juvenile. Nice ditty

The Situation
Date: 9/9/2023 4:24:00 PM

LOL really!