The Situation Poet Pleiades

Depressed

Deliver the speech to avoid an explosion
Depress animosities rightful emotions
Decapitate that which would delay our cause
Desire the path made by the Lord
Disable powers to fight and defraud
Deposit the heroism that history records
Deserve the gifts of obediences reward

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Anisha Dutta September 30, 2023 at 10:59 AM Very nicely composed. I appreciate. Blessings

Valsa George September 11, 2023 at 10:54 PM Animosities can lead one to depression. Love is the antidote to depression. Powerfully penned, dear friend.

Joe Maverick September 11, 2023 at 10:19 PM Hope this does well for you, pleased to read Today.'

Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2023 at 3:26 PM Lots of great lines to start with D for depression. I wonder if it's ok to do pleiades with more than six syllables per line. I think I read somewhere that it's ok, but the sponsors here always do with only six, which makes it so limiting. This way you did it helped you to make more complete thoughts. The Situation September 11, 2023 at 6:08 PM Two sets of instructions I read both. Used the one that worked.

Curie Stark September 9, 2023 at 1:10 AM I couldn't have thought depression could be described so hauntingly beautiful

Sara Kendrick September 8, 2023 at 12:10 PM Creatively expressed one from of depression. I enjoyed reading your work today. If for a contest it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara