Denouement

While midnight wears the longest hours An ashen star peers to act as my keeper; Circling around like a threadbare of a glow When the bulb in the room snuffs, fades, Leaving me alone without any reflection. In a world drained by pain, somehow void Of clarity and filled with unbearable angst, Its pale twinkle seems to listen as I uncover Reminisces whirling like ghastly shadows That even the crush of tears cannot explain. Yet, my star leans nearer to understand All the secrets my voice needed to disclose... I wander around the yard... my arms Hanging at the sides: a whiff of air blows, In need of a private confession, of my acceptance To unleash such heaviness buried Within my soul: love's requiem gushing Until a closure ends in deliverance. Finally, star- guide blinks and points My reflection across the mirror of dawn. Contest: Middle January Premiere Contest For Brian Strand Reposted 1/18/2018

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Date: 1/20/2018 10:34:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your fine win, nette.
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Date: 1/18/2018 4:45:00 PM
You write with such flow and ease, Nette, and this is no different ... so charming and extravagant in every way, with wonderful imagery and expression. Love it! Congratulations on your win! :-)
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Date: 1/18/2018 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful write, Nette. Congratulations on this win! ...Fran
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Date: 8/25/2016 8:15:00 AM
Breathtaking... enjoyed the read. :) Congrats Sunita
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Date: 8/25/2016 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations. I like this and the last line is smashing. Kai
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Date: 8/24/2016 9:33:00 PM
Everything is better (usually) in the morning. ;-) Congrats!
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Date: 8/24/2016 8:29:00 PM
Beautifully written! Great job.
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Date: 8/24/2016 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 8/24/2016 12:09:00 AM
I really like how you did yours, Nette. It draws the reader in and flows beautifully till its end.
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Date: 8/23/2016 8:22:00 PM
Beautifully done nette...Nayda will love it I'm sure...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/23/2016 5:01:00 PM
So lovely...philosophical musings interspersed with nature's splendor laced with spiritual offerings...My absolute favorite trio and you have penned this as exquisitely as I have ever read.Truly it is a pleasure to read such fine 'art':-) A favourite for sure. My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/23/2016 4:57:00 PM
You depict the outcome of closure in a sullen, lonely, and radiant way. This is outstanding poem ---the angst released through light ( star).
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Date: 8/23/2016 3:59:00 PM
Wonderful...
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Date: 8/23/2016 3:48:00 PM
awesome write - love it (must confess I'll have to Google NI Negron)
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