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Denouement

DENOUEMENT No one had stuck to the script. Improvisation had become the necessity of constantly changing sets. The orchestra pit, gaping maw of failure, waiting to devour tongue tied practiced lines, reverberating costumed fears masquerading as “stage” presence, applauded by long vacant stares. Passion, lost amid lust, love, tainted by doubt, time’s creaky stage counting cadence of faltering steps hesitation. Echoed shadows family, friends, supporting cast last act, last scene, last bow, flowers wilting final curtain call. 8/13/2016 submitted to – Denouement – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 8/26/2016 9:51:00 AM
:D :D
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Date: 8/25/2016 8:14:00 AM
A true denouement...very wisely put. Congrats :) Sunita
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:30:00 PM
thanks Sunita...I've often been call a wise guy but never a wise man....
Date: 8/25/2016 2:36:00 AM
Great curtain call. I like this very much. Kai
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:29:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Kai. it seems that final curtain call is the one we all dread.
Date: 8/25/2016 12:00:00 AM
Great write - descriptive in simplification. Congratulations. Mark
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Mark for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 8/24/2016 8:51:00 PM
Great play of frustration and disappointment. Congrats! :-)
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:27:00 PM
Yeah, the whole world a stage and I keep stepping on the creaky boards. Thanks for stopping to read and comment Tom
Date: 8/24/2016 4:09:00 PM
A solid definition, congratulations John...
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Charlie
Date: 8/24/2016 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations John on the placement of the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:26:00 PM
Not bad, Nayda, I learned a new word and placed in the contest. Ah, the poetic learning curve - an endless verse. Thank you for taking the time to administer the contest and for the very unique theme of this one.
Date: 8/13/2016 3:25:00 PM
John, I believe this is the definition of denouement in poetic verse. Well written with a lot of thought.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate the fine words you offer in comment. Sorry to be so tardy in replying but life (and fishing) intervene.

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