Denouement

DENOUEMENT


No one had stuck to the script.
Improvisation had become the necessity
of constantly changing sets.

The orchestra pit, gaping maw
of failure, waiting to devour
tongue tied practiced lines,

reverberating costumed fears
masquerading as “stage” presence,
applauded by long vacant stares.

Passion, lost amid lust,
love, tainted by doubt,
time’s creaky stage

counting cadence
of faltering steps
hesitation.

Echoed shadows
family, friends,
supporting cast

last act, last scene, last bow,
flowers wilting
final curtain call.


8/13/2016

submitted to – Denouement – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:51 AM
:D :D
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 8:14 AM
A true denouement...very wisely put. Congrats :) Sunita
Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:30 PM
thanks Sunita...I've often been call a wise guy but never a wise man....
Neumann Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 2:36 AM
Great curtain call. I like this very much. Kai
Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Kai. it seems that final curtain call is the one we all dread.
Van Der Merwe Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great write - descriptive in simplification. Congratulations. Mark
Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Thank you Mark for stopping to read and comment.
Arnone Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Great play of frustration and disappointment. Congrats! :-)
Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:27 PM
Yeah, the whole world a stage and I keep stepping on the creaky boards. Thanks for stopping to read and comment Tom
Smith Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 4:09 PM
A solid definition, congratulations John...
Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Thanks Charlie
Negron Flores Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations John on the placement of the contest.
Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Not bad, Nayda, I learned a new word and placed in the contest. Ah, the poetic learning curve - an endless verse. Thank you for taking the time to administer the contest and for the very unique theme of this one.
Turner Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 3:25 PM
John, I believe this is the definition of denouement in poetic verse. Well written with a lot of thought.
Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate the fine words you offer in comment. Sorry to be so tardy in replying but life (and fishing) intervene.
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