Denouement

DENOUEMENT


No one had stuck to the script.
Improvisation had become the necessity
of constantly changing sets.

The orchestra pit, gaping maw
of failure, waiting to devour
tongue tied practiced lines,

reverberating costumed fears
masquerading as “stage” presence,
applauded by long vacant stares.

Passion, lost amid lust,
love, tainted by doubt,
time’s creaky stage

counting cadence
of faltering steps
hesitation.

Echoed shadows
family, friends,
supporting cast

last act, last scene, last bow,
flowers wilting
final curtain call.


8/13/2016

submitted to – Denouement – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/26/2016 9:51:00 AM
:D :D
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Date: 8/25/2016 8:14:00 AM
A true denouement...very wisely put. Congrats :) Sunita
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:30:00 PM
thanks Sunita...I've often been call a wise guy but never a wise man....
Date: 8/25/2016 2:36:00 AM
Great curtain call. I like this very much. Kai
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:29:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Kai. it seems that final curtain call is the one we all dread.
Date: 8/25/2016 12:00:00 AM
Great write - descriptive in simplification. Congratulations. Mark
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Mark for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 8/24/2016 8:51:00 PM
Great play of frustration and disappointment. Congrats! :-)
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:27:00 PM
Yeah, the whole world a stage and I keep stepping on the creaky boards. Thanks for stopping to read and comment Tom
Date: 8/24/2016 4:09:00 PM
A solid definition, congratulations John...
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Charlie
Date: 8/24/2016 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations John on the placement of the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:26:00 PM
Not bad, Nayda, I learned a new word and placed in the contest. Ah, the poetic learning curve - an endless verse. Thank you for taking the time to administer the contest and for the very unique theme of this one.
Date: 8/13/2016 3:25:00 PM
John, I believe this is the definition of denouement in poetic verse. Well written with a lot of thought.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate the fine words you offer in comment. Sorry to be so tardy in replying but life (and fishing) intervene.
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