Denial

air -you cannot see breathing, so you know it's there yet, you deny Him ~*~
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February 1, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations Audrey on this well written work of faith.....Margaret
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February 1, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your win Audrey. This is a profound little piece. Blessings, Connie
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February 1, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Indisputable proof. I agree. Congratulations Audrey. Love, Joyce
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February 1, 2010 at 3:50 AM
Congratulations Audrey on your placement in The Rambling Poet’s “Faith” Mini-Poetry contest with this haiku. Your wisdom has placed you in the winners circle. Smiles, Dane Ann
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February 1, 2010 at 2:56 AM
Congratulations on this this excellent thought provoking Haiku, Audrey. Robert
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February 1, 2010 at 2:12 AM
Congratulations on a fourth place win, in my contest Faith, with this beautiful poem.
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November 4, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Very profound, Audrey! Excellent write. Love, Carolyn
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November 3, 2009 at 10:56 AM
This is excellent. You have confronted lack of faith with this well written poem, Audrey. Keep the words flowing and your talent showing! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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October 31, 2009 at 7:29 PM
nice ideas, nicely penned!!
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October 28, 2009 at 6:24 PM
A phenomenal load of talent you have here. Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Leaves the reader with a lot to think about. By the way, thanks for the kind sentiments on my poem and also, I took your advice and entered it in the "Let It Snow" contest. Thank you and God bless you. Milt
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October 28, 2009 at 5:07 PM
yet you see him but you deny him... And thanks for the comment about Copper, it was amlost 2 years ago.. I have shared my love with alot of horses :D
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October 27, 2009 at 7:32 PM
Without air we cannot breath! Yet we cannot see it. So faith is so important. Pam.
Joseph Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 11:33 AM
and his hand has always been on my shoulder....love this - well done
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October 22, 2009 at 11:49 PM
Well said Audrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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October 22, 2009 at 6:49 PM
This is a wonderful Haiku...enjoyed reading. Thanks for all the nice comments...Marty
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Nicely done Haiku. Has deep meaning. Keep writing. Sara
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October 22, 2009 at 10:27 AM
~~~Magnificent Audrey~~~ and some still refuse to believe. Love, Carol
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October 22, 2009 at 6:56 AM
EXACTLY! SO SIMPLE, YET SOME CAN NOT GRASP IT. LOVE, LAINIE
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October 21, 2009 at 6:17 PM
Bravo, You go girl. Audry it amazing some refuse to believe in God because he is invisible, when the very oxygen that gives them life is also invisible.Lol, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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October 21, 2009 at 2:04 PM
Wow. Unbelievable stringy point attached and formated in just three lines. Interesting. Keep writing
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