Denial

air -you cannot see
breathing, so you know it's there
yet, you deny Him

~*~

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Margaret Foster

Date: 2/1/2010 5:10:00 PM

Congratulations Audrey on this well written work of faith.....Margaret

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/1/2010 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Audrey. This is a profound little piece. Blessings, Connie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/1/2010 10:59:00 AM

Indisputable proof. I agree. Congratulations Audrey. Love, Joyce

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/1/2010 3:50:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on your placement in The Rambling Poet’s “Faith” Mini-Poetry contest with this haiku. Your wisdom has placed you in the winners circle. Smiles, Dane Ann

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/1/2010 2:56:00 AM

Congratulations on this this excellent thought provoking Haiku, Audrey. Robert

Constance La France

Date: 2/1/2010 2:12:00 AM

Congratulations on a fourth place win, in my contest Faith, with this beautiful poem.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2009 12:31:00 PM

Very profound, Audrey! Excellent write. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/3/2009 10:56:00 AM

This is excellent. You have confronted lack of faith with this well written poem, Audrey. Keep the words flowing and your talent showing! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/31/2009 7:29:00 PM

nice ideas, nicely penned!!

Milton Toran

Date: 10/28/2009 6:24:00 PM

A phenomenal load of talent you have here. Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Leaves the reader with a lot to think about. By the way, thanks for the kind sentiments on my poem and also, I took your advice and entered it in the "Let It Snow" contest. Thank you and God bless you. Milt

Brooke Snyder

Date: 10/28/2009 5:07:00 PM

yet you see him but you deny him... And thanks for the comment about Copper, it was amlost 2 years ago.. I have shared my love with alot of horses :D

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/27/2009 7:32:00 PM

Without air we cannot breath! Yet we cannot see it. So faith is so important. Pam.

Veronica Joseph

Date: 10/26/2009 11:33:00 AM

and his hand has always been on my shoulder....love this - well done

Brian Strand

Date: 10/22/2009 11:49:00 PM

Well said Audrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Marty Owens

Date: 10/22/2009 6:49:00 PM

This is a wonderful Haiku...enjoyed reading. Thanks for all the nice comments...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2009 12:00:00 PM

Nicely done Haiku. Has deep meaning. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/22/2009 10:27:00 AM

~~~Magnificent Audrey~~~ and some still refuse to believe. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 10/22/2009 6:56:00 AM

EXACTLY! SO SIMPLE, YET SOME CAN NOT GRASP IT. LOVE, LAINIE

John Freeman

Date: 10/21/2009 6:17:00 PM

Bravo, You go girl. Audry it amazing some refuse to believe in God because he is invisible, when the very oxygen that gives them life is also invisible.Lol, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Olajide Adelana

Date: 10/21/2009 2:04:00 PM

Wow. Unbelievable stringy point attached and formated in just three lines. Interesting. Keep writing

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