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Demonically Dispossessed

Demonically Dispossessed ...man has the ability to express great love, and dispense great evil... The legions of darkness descend as they beastly bewilder and offend The serpents of Babylon attend as their ecumenical evil does extend In a pandemonium plunge with pernicious pains and succulent sponge With tenacious tongues they lunge and fast fade away as they expunge ~~~ In their fallacious faculties fermenting feces frolicking the wasteland Demonic disciples preach profanities before the sanguineous sand As they efficiently eviscerate exigently under their hellion command For they are curious to castrate the condemned as their cries demand ~~~ Within their taunting tantalize as hearts bleed amidst the scarlet skies Their goal the soul to compromise and for love to cripple and capsize In a vortex venomous vile blasphemous broods of a damnation defile For we must battle the bile as warriors of light with a sagacious smile. Music by Slipknot-'The devil in I' June.28.2018 Eight word challenge-7 Sponsored by: John Hamilton Placed 2'nd

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Date: 7/20/2018 2:56:00 AM
Wow.
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Date: 7/2/2018 1:48:00 PM
A wonderful poem, ^WW^, using the required words. Congratulations on your Podium placement! Sandra
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Date: 6/30/2018 7:55:00 AM
Awesome and beautifully done. Brilliant use of the the 8 words. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:08:00 PM
I like the "sound effect" of your words in this dark poetry. BIG congrats for your win, WW.
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:36:00 PM
WW, the heavy dark mood of the content of your poem is carried beautifully by your adept artistry in creating intriguing and gripping imagery. Magnificent, my dear friend.. Congratulations on your wonderful win! ~Susan
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:47:00 PM
I was looking for a story line, and sometimes rhyme gets in the way, but my my WW, this write comes from a shining star, what a vocab you have, congrats on a fine win!!
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Date: 6/29/2018 3:06:00 PM
Hi John, as always your pen sings gold. This is a word fest of mighty proportions my friend. How you did manage to keep up the high level of poetic art is beyond me. An excellent write that sings vision after vision into the mound. This one has such an awesome content my friend. This is a definite fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/29/2018 2:54:00 PM
This is a masterpiece my friend. Your pen has magic to it! An awesome write WW! Best of luck in the contest...Charlie
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Date: 6/29/2018 10:33:00 AM
WOW! I'm awe struck by this write. Loved the alliteration and the internal rhyme you had going on in the first stanza. Those were some pretty heavy words you used to get your message across. I must say...it gave me a scare. When the evil comes from those claiming to be pious...there is where the devil lurks.
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Date: 6/29/2018 10:11:00 AM
Those are some bad dudes WW, not the best party guests, I suppose...well done
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:44:00 AM
you sure know how to set the mood for darkly things and brave warriors of old, Gl in the contest blessed one
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Date: 6/28/2018 11:37:00 PM
WW.. A fabulous write, best of luck in the contest!
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