Demon In Plastic.

In grimed secluded alleyway’s it’s his key into the divine, 
Believing deliverance has arrived while he walks this narrow line,

Those eyes begin seeing reality his mind now lucid has cleared,
The truth’s of his past now a cacophony welling up within perfect ears,

Numbing out his nervous system a blind faith blanketed brain,
Sporadic lighting of violent flashes lost within his mind deranged,

Everything once believed assured now snippets of a life long elapsed,
Consigning his soul to valueless spirits his self worth allowed to collapse,

Without destination a wandering shell conforming to push through the days,
Ignoring the voices of pleas and salvation sinking farther within mired haze,

Memories taunting of mandible grasps devouring slowly his will to survive,
Nightmares convulsing those hideous features transforming beauty into 
despised,

Shrinking in angst from real vindication devolving back where the journey began,
He ties off his arm inserting the needle releasing the demons inside once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 12/18/2009 6:23:00 PM
Excellent piece Charles >> James
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Date: 3/8/2009 10:59:00 AM
Wow Charles this poem hits home every time I read it - Charles i do hope that things are going well with you and your family - You are greatly missed and always loved here - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/3/2009 9:32:00 AM
Congrats Charles on your featured write, bravo! Ernesto
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Date: 3/3/2009 9:14:00 AM
Congrats Charlie, on the featuring of "Demons in Plastic." Vince
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Date: 3/2/2009 2:57:00 PM
WOW, I didn't know at first where you were going but when you got there it really hit hard!! I've buried too many addicts ... this is a very profound write, Charles and a wonderful selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Charlie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2009 6:26:00 AM
Warmest congrats Charles on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Hope your daughter is doing well. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/1/2009 5:25:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Much to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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