Demon Dance

There once was an old man, a perv.
And wow! He had quite the nerve.
He pulled down his pants,
Said "Watch my demon dance."
He really threw me a curve.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 12:32 AM
Oh my, how did I ever let THIS one get by?? Great poem and funny picture.
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January 25, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Lol. Thank you, Andrea, for your support of my account. You are a doll.
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December 18, 2017 at 4:44 PM
This is really funny! The picture backs it up perfectly!.............great poem.....pat
Tripp Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 11:07 PM
Thank you, Pat. Appreciate your support.
Mccall Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:55 PM
OH Rhoda your sense of humor is a breath of fresh air. I love this limerick. and that photo ha,ha,ha,ha,
Tripp Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Thanks, Edward. That photo gives me night sweats for all the wrong reasons. Lol
Callus Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 9:27 AM
This is really witty and original, Rhoda:) That smug look on his face says it all...while I can also imagine your big grin when writing this! Regards // paul
Tripp Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 11:05 AM
Lol. Thanks. The "curve" part was not originally intended, but I just had to do it. Thanks for your kind comments, my Dear.
Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Funny poem, Rhoda! Wow! That's some picture! Janice
Tripp Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Lol. Thanks, Janice.
Gondolf Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 5:00 AM
Very funny one, Rhoda, and that picture is going to haunt me all day! John
Tripp Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 11:43 AM
Hahahaha. You're welcome for that. Boo!
Pandit Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:19 PM
And what a curve that was! Demon dance well articulated!
Tripp Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Lol. Thank you!
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