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Demon Dance

There once was an old man, a perv. And wow! He had quite the nerve. He pulled down his pants, Said "Watch my demon dance." He really threw me a curve.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2018 12:32:00 AM

Oh my, how did I ever let THIS one get by?? Great poem and funny picture.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/25/2018 5:56:00 PM

Lol. Thank you, Andrea, for your support of my account. You are a doll.

Pat Adams

Date: 12/18/2017 4:44:00 PM

This is really funny! The picture backs it up perfectly!.............great poem.....pat

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/18/2017 11:07:00 PM

Thank you, Pat. Appreciate your support.

Edward Mccall

Date: 12/2/2017 6:55:00 PM

OH Rhoda your sense of humor is a breath of fresh air. I love this limerick. and that photo ha,ha,ha,ha,

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/2/2017 8:18:00 PM

Thanks, Edward. That photo gives me night sweats for all the wrong reasons. Lol

Paul Callus

Date: 12/2/2017 9:27:00 AM

This is really witty and original, Rhoda:) That smug look on his face says it all...while I can also imagine your big grin when writing this! Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/2/2017 11:05:00 AM

Lol. Thanks. The "curve" part was not originally intended, but I just had to do it. Thanks for your kind comments, my Dear.