Demolition By Soft Touches

Your words were soft, almost holy.
You held me until the static in my mind went quiet,
and for a moment, I floated
on a perfectly still ocean.

Then came your warning: Behave.
A cold hand pulling the curtain back on the act.
Was it all a performance?
Now the quiet feels like a trap,
and I am walking blindly,
waiting for the floor to drop beneath me.

Are you trying to rot my conscience from within?
To build an armor around me,
only to strip it away
once you’ve bent me to your hidden design?

Stop playing games with my shadow.
I am tired of dying in installments,
of being eroded piece by piece.
If you are going to strike, do it now—
drive the blade deep
and leave me completely broken or completely free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 7:38 PM
Ah, she knows how to press your buttons, I see. You want decisiveness; she proceeds agonizingly slowly.... Can you beat her at her little game?
Jones Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 2:26 AM
Wow! A creative engaging write that is entertaining! I like your idea and how you executed it! Well done
Buhagiar Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 12:48 AM
Your last stanza is a masterpiece. The preceeding was a fine build up. Wonderful poem.
Empress Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:47 PM
Omg! I missed reading you! This is just breathtaking, left me in awe touched by the emotional depth of this poem! Yes youve categorized it well, it has that psychological element to it and I think many when in relationships or romantically tied, they do have those fears and questions and thoughts, and this one would resonate with many on a soul level! I just love the seamless softness of your flow, and the way youv expressed is so very evocative! "Now the quiet feels like a trap" that hits deep! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always ~ best wishes
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