Demise of a Doorman

The Demise of a Doorman 

Eric Ericson, ex wrestler, was staying at my boardinghouse. 
He had a job as a doorman (bouncer) at a local nightspot,
but was fired for drinking on the job and could no longer 
pay for his room. I told him, with heavy heart, that he had
to leave next day at noon. I went up to his room at eleven
asked if I could drive him somewhere? Say, the bus station.
Eric sat on a chair looking out of the window, it was a nice
spring day and the mild breeze made the curtains flap like
sails did on boats in the bay. He civilly thanked me, said he 
wasn’t going far. At precisely twelve a cold shudder went 
through the sleepy house and I froze not wanting to know
what the wobble could mean. Half past twelve I went up to 
his room, Eric, the quiet man, hung from the end of a rope.
The curtains billowed it had been such a beautiful day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/20/2011 9:50:00 AM
The demons in a man's soul are beyond our ability to reach sometimes. Say a prayer for these people. Tony
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 9/20/2011 1:39:00 PM
Yes, Tony it is a hard life for some
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