Demeter At the Chinese Opera

DEMETER AT THE CHINESE OPERA


So, I invited you to the Chinese Opera impulsively
Thinking of masks and dragons and triumphant mystery
I though it was time we threw off our coats
Of mourning, you for your  daughter

Stopping one night, on the way home from a party,
So randomly, cruelly, killed by the monster
Who has slain more than all the century’s wars
And my private sorrow for which there is no funeral.

I remember your straying husband also
Loved the Chinese Opera.  What will happen
If we all meet between the acts?
Surely forgiveness will come like snow on the mountain

And we will live in a harmony that can never be suppressed
In a slow majestic music that takes account of grief. 

(C) Rosemarie Rowley
From IN MEMORY OF HER (2008)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/18/2016 7:16:00 PM
As I sway to the musical forgiveness by means of an instrument extravaganza the touch you put on this one speaks volumes of your knowledge of God. Please stop by to check out a couple of my breathings when you have a moment.
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Date: 6/27/2016 9:09:00 AM
Wow, Rosemary -- bittersweet emotions and thoughts, succinctly expressed. Your poem is interesting to me in that, although it expresses universal emotions arising after the death of someone close, your poem tells a story about the narrator, the deceased and the specific person to whom the narrator is addressing this poem. Thanks for sharing what surely is an important, sad memory, capped with one of positive hope.
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Date: 6/26/2016 8:10:00 PM
This is my favorite of the poems I have read today.
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:05:00 PM
wow, what an incredible poem!!! A well deserved win because this is sheer genius. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:38:00 AM
Rosemarie, very un sonnet-like BUT exquisite! You have a lot of talent, it reads like free verse though some poets are writing sonnets without end rhyme now calling anything with 14 lines a sonnet. Never-the-less, no matter the name of the form exquisite it is-and know- for my contests I always appreciate out-of-the box thinking! Congrads Light & love
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Rosemarie Rowley
Date: 2/19/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thanks so much, Debbie, appreciate your comments, very kind!
Date: 2/16/2015 1:49:00 PM
such beautiful but so sad sad imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Rosemarie Rowley
Date: 2/19/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Date: 2/16/2015 3:16:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Rosemarie!
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Rosemarie Rowley
Date: 2/19/2015 3:24:00 PM
Thank you, so kind!
Date: 2/16/2015 1:00:00 AM
Rosemarie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win*** Love **SKAT
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Rosemarie Rowley
Date: 2/19/2015 3:24:00 PM
Thanks SKAT A, love your posts!
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