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Demerit

demerit points with each unkind thought guilt at heaven's gate posted on July 29, 2018

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Date: 7/29/2018 5:09:00 PM
I think we should not be so hard on ourselves! However, I really like this one of yours, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2018 7:15:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.
Date: 7/29/2018 1:00:00 PM
And there you'll be forgiven, Lin, for you are aware. So much said in so little.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2018 4:58:00 PM
Not really if you continue to do it knowingly. Nice try, Sunlite. Line xx
Date: 7/29/2018 12:08:00 PM
Hee hee, aka karma, I'm not religious, but (womb)man, do I love this one!
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Date: 7/29/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen, for your lovely visit and comment.

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